YusufES
Sep 15, 2015
Writing Feedback / 'numerous plus points' - Undesirable consequences of an electronic media? (IELTS Task II) [4]
Let me try :
Actually, this is well-written
The first paragraph,.
If you mean since=because, it should be --> since + SV (avoid FANBOYS to be begin a sentence)
if you mean since=because of, it should be --> because + n (you can use - due to/ owing to/ thanks to)
-Yusuf
Let me try :
Actually, this is well-written
The first paragraph,.
If you mean since=because, it should be --> since + SV (avoid FANBOYS to be begin a sentence)
if you mean since=because of, it should be --> because + n (you can use - due to/ owing to/ thanks to)
-Yusuf