Writing Feedback / In this era, the media have held the prominent thing in almost all aspects [4]

For both of your advantages and disadvantages , you should provide more points and supporting evidence to support your stand on the topic.

For example , media provides instant availability of information (research pedia , n.d).
You should also try to elaborate on the advantages of media.

The one in bold is taken from chrisyhsun of enotes.

Letters / How should I write my email to my teacher? [5]

Dear Sir

In preparation for this coming test this Tuesday , I would like to check if it is possible for you to upload some webcast for the tutorial questions that you have left out in your shared dropbox.

I have some doubts in some of the tutorial and out of class questions that I would like to clarify.

It would be great if you could upload those video so that it will be able to clear my doubts for those questions.

Thank you and sorry for any inconvenience that might have caused you.

Yours sincerely

Johnny

Please let me know if the above is ok? sorry for my poor english

Letters / How should I write my email to my teacher? [5]

How to write this email?

Background information.
A lecturer from another group has uploaded his own recorded webcast video for his students for his group. I would like to check with him if it is possible for him to grant me access to it.

Previously , he has uploaded the video for everyone to view but this time only his own group. The reason why I am requesting it is because I find it very useful in helping me recap some of the key concept that I might have misunderstood or forgot. Last time the video that he has uploaded has helped me greatly in my test.

My draft

Dear Professor

I would like to check with you if it is possible for you to grant me access to your webcast video folder. I am unable access to your folder as I am a student from another group.

The reason that I ask for your consideration regarding this matter, is because I find it very useful in helping me understand some of the key concept taught during the lecture. The webcast video that you have uploaded previously has helped me greatly in understanding some of the key concept that I have missed out during lecture. I am a slow learner in class and sometime I cant keep up with the pace. I feel that by having access to the previous podcasts, I will be able to complete my review and keep up with the pace in the class.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my request. I will accept any decision you make as final. I am looking forward to your positive response.

Sincerely,
Johnny

Sorry for my poor English.