rosemaryyy
Oct 29, 2015
Undergraduate / Storytelling and Media Class - COLLEGE ESSAY [7]
So do I. Your essay's topic is broad and i also think that you should focus on either your writing skill or your curiosity about films, i don't know :) but the language you used in your essay is interesting and it made me want to read much more. If you work on it and norrow down your topic a bit, im sure that it will be a great essay :)
So do I. Your essay's topic is broad and i also think that you should focus on either your writing skill or your curiosity about films, i don't know :) but the language you used in your essay is interesting and it made me want to read much more. If you work on it and norrow down your topic a bit, im sure that it will be a great essay :)