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Nov 16, 2015
Graduate / Further Financial Understanding and Career Advancement - MSc in Finance - Imperial College [5]
Hi good people of EssayForum, I've been reading several essays and their suggestions and they definitely have helped me write my own.
Now that I have finished mine, I'd like your input.
I realized that this seems a bit long, but the instruction did say that it can be 1-2 sides of A4, but I'd love to hear your opinion on my essay length. Should it be shorter?
Statement of Purpose
Career in finance has been my aspiration since I was little and my undergraduate study in Finance was like fuel to my burning desire for extensive financial knowledge and a successful career in Finance. My two best friends and I would often daydream about having our own investment bank or asset management firm. However, all the financial knowledge that I have obtained during my undergraduate study was simply not sufficient to quench my thirst of deeper financial knowledge, technique, and understanding. That being said, I simply need to learn more.
Whilst my undergraduate degree in Finance should be sufficient that it ensures my ability to succeed in the financial industry, I find it absolutely important to continue my study, to hone my technical financial skills, to obtain specialized knowledge in investment, and ultimately to get the proverbial rocket strapped to the back of my financial career. An investment skills and know-how is particularly important as I plan to get straight into the investment field once I completed my study at Imperial. I am planning and expecting to grow and really thrive in the investment field five years after completing my master while, at the same time, preparing to pursue my MBA.
Imperial's MSc Finance Programme stands out above the rest as it focuses on helping students maximize their career potential in a world-class teaching environment signified by its reputation as the No.1 Masters in Finance programme in UK. Numbers don't lie, Imperial's graduates are very attractive to top employers around the world with 93% employed within 6 months which is a massive appeal for students who wish to really advance their career. This programme is also a great fit for me as it offers a plethora of investment-related core and elective courses such as Investment and Portfolio Management, Derivatives, Behavioral Investment Management and Quantitative Trading Strategies which I seek and. Imperial's rich access to several essential softwares to accompany student's study and research is also an immense advantage over other universities. Finally, the partnership with CFA and CISI and the excellent advisory board line-up will ensure the quality and integrity of this programme.
Immediately after completing my undergraduate degree, I specifically looked for and landed an internship at one of the largest banks in Indonesia, CIMB Niaga. I was positioned at the Strategic & Finance Department and the 2-months internship has definitely sparked my already blazing interest in pursuing career in finance. I worked on several important projects such as CIMB's operational expense daily movement, efficiency-related initiatives, and cost-allocation project. Working at a massive and highly reputable bank taught me the value of being meticulous, honest, and open to work with others. Dealing with data everyday forced me to pay maximum details on every project I was working on as a single mistake in typing, copying, or pasting can undo all the hard work I put. Mistakes, however, are rarely avoidable and being honest with your partners or supervisors about mistakes made are the way to go. That way, all the mistakes made can be fixed immediately. Finally, I learned that it is impossible to succeed without the ability to work with others, be it in teams or as individuals.
During my undergraduate years, I strive to not only excel academically, but beyond that also to shine in extracurricular and organizational activities. I joined a non-governmental organization that aims to promote financial literacy among Indonesian youth called Youth Finance Indonesia. My strong background in Finance allowed me to be their Education and Training Coordinator. I create education materials needed by the organization and conduct internal upgrading to internal members in the form of basic financial and capital market education. I also co-founded a campus-wide organization called UGM Entrepreneur Club that functions as a bowl for up-and-coming student entrepreneurs with growing businesses or innovative ideas. Coordinating colleagues, designing strategies, communicating with other divisions within the organization, these organizational experience helped greatly in developing my leadership and interpersonal skills which, in turn, will help me conduct my study at Imperial.
To further sharpen my financial acumen, I participated in and have been finalists to several major national and international finance-related competitions such as the Indonesia Investment Banking Competition and Indonesia Capital Market Student Studies Conference and Competition. However, one of my biggest achievements was completing my undergraduate thesis titled 'Government Quality and Corporate Cash Holdings in Asia and Oceania' in less than 2 months as I had promised to my parents. Unfortunately, participating in several competitions delayed my thesis work and by the time the competition ended, I only had roughly 2 months to work with. However, with enormous determination, excellent ability to plan, and high enthusiasm for my research topic, I was able to finish my thesis on time and received the grade 'A' to pass without any revision necessary. As cliche as it may sound, at that moment I realized that I can do anything I set my mind to.
To conclude, I bring drive and determination to the table that is already brimming with passion for finance. I bring focus and rigor in my effort to understand the complex and intricate work of finance and investment. I bring high level of enthusiasm, open-mindedness and unique perspective in collaborating with many other bright-minded individuals in your programme. Ultimately, I believe that Imperial's MSc in Finance programme will help me achieve my goal of further financial understanding and career advancement in the field of finance and investment.
Hi good people of EssayForum, I've been reading several essays and their suggestions and they definitely have helped me write my own.
Now that I have finished mine, I'd like your input.
The advanced field of finance and investment
I realized that this seems a bit long, but the instruction did say that it can be 1-2 sides of A4, but I'd love to hear your opinion on my essay length. Should it be shorter?
Statement of Purpose
Career in finance has been my aspiration since I was little and my undergraduate study in Finance was like fuel to my burning desire for extensive financial knowledge and a successful career in Finance. My two best friends and I would often daydream about having our own investment bank or asset management firm. However, all the financial knowledge that I have obtained during my undergraduate study was simply not sufficient to quench my thirst of deeper financial knowledge, technique, and understanding. That being said, I simply need to learn more.
Whilst my undergraduate degree in Finance should be sufficient that it ensures my ability to succeed in the financial industry, I find it absolutely important to continue my study, to hone my technical financial skills, to obtain specialized knowledge in investment, and ultimately to get the proverbial rocket strapped to the back of my financial career. An investment skills and know-how is particularly important as I plan to get straight into the investment field once I completed my study at Imperial. I am planning and expecting to grow and really thrive in the investment field five years after completing my master while, at the same time, preparing to pursue my MBA.
Imperial's MSc Finance Programme stands out above the rest as it focuses on helping students maximize their career potential in a world-class teaching environment signified by its reputation as the No.1 Masters in Finance programme in UK. Numbers don't lie, Imperial's graduates are very attractive to top employers around the world with 93% employed within 6 months which is a massive appeal for students who wish to really advance their career. This programme is also a great fit for me as it offers a plethora of investment-related core and elective courses such as Investment and Portfolio Management, Derivatives, Behavioral Investment Management and Quantitative Trading Strategies which I seek and. Imperial's rich access to several essential softwares to accompany student's study and research is also an immense advantage over other universities. Finally, the partnership with CFA and CISI and the excellent advisory board line-up will ensure the quality and integrity of this programme.
Immediately after completing my undergraduate degree, I specifically looked for and landed an internship at one of the largest banks in Indonesia, CIMB Niaga. I was positioned at the Strategic & Finance Department and the 2-months internship has definitely sparked my already blazing interest in pursuing career in finance. I worked on several important projects such as CIMB's operational expense daily movement, efficiency-related initiatives, and cost-allocation project. Working at a massive and highly reputable bank taught me the value of being meticulous, honest, and open to work with others. Dealing with data everyday forced me to pay maximum details on every project I was working on as a single mistake in typing, copying, or pasting can undo all the hard work I put. Mistakes, however, are rarely avoidable and being honest with your partners or supervisors about mistakes made are the way to go. That way, all the mistakes made can be fixed immediately. Finally, I learned that it is impossible to succeed without the ability to work with others, be it in teams or as individuals.
During my undergraduate years, I strive to not only excel academically, but beyond that also to shine in extracurricular and organizational activities. I joined a non-governmental organization that aims to promote financial literacy among Indonesian youth called Youth Finance Indonesia. My strong background in Finance allowed me to be their Education and Training Coordinator. I create education materials needed by the organization and conduct internal upgrading to internal members in the form of basic financial and capital market education. I also co-founded a campus-wide organization called UGM Entrepreneur Club that functions as a bowl for up-and-coming student entrepreneurs with growing businesses or innovative ideas. Coordinating colleagues, designing strategies, communicating with other divisions within the organization, these organizational experience helped greatly in developing my leadership and interpersonal skills which, in turn, will help me conduct my study at Imperial.
To further sharpen my financial acumen, I participated in and have been finalists to several major national and international finance-related competitions such as the Indonesia Investment Banking Competition and Indonesia Capital Market Student Studies Conference and Competition. However, one of my biggest achievements was completing my undergraduate thesis titled 'Government Quality and Corporate Cash Holdings in Asia and Oceania' in less than 2 months as I had promised to my parents. Unfortunately, participating in several competitions delayed my thesis work and by the time the competition ended, I only had roughly 2 months to work with. However, with enormous determination, excellent ability to plan, and high enthusiasm for my research topic, I was able to finish my thesis on time and received the grade 'A' to pass without any revision necessary. As cliche as it may sound, at that moment I realized that I can do anything I set my mind to.
To conclude, I bring drive and determination to the table that is already brimming with passion for finance. I bring focus and rigor in my effort to understand the complex and intricate work of finance and investment. I bring high level of enthusiasm, open-mindedness and unique perspective in collaborating with many other bright-minded individuals in your programme. Ultimately, I believe that Imperial's MSc in Finance programme will help me achieve my goal of further financial understanding and career advancement in the field of finance and investment.