Undergraduate / Describing an issue related to the college where I will study and stating my own opinion [2]

the press of my country, Indonesia, is an adherent of 'Social Responsibility' theory, which is free to publish any information but still bounded by moral values. But I think this freedom exactly cause many infractions of ethic code. Furthermore when it is concerned with the company importance, every news are seems right, either it is good for public or not.

For the obvious example, when here was a genenal election of president, I found that different tv channel reported diferrent result of the voices counting. Each other mentioned the different winner of the election, appropriated with their candidate, even although it was national event. Certainly it made people were bewildered and confused which one was true.

In my opinion, the media mass lost their honor and many betterments are needed. the government must be braver to regulate and give punishment for them, and campaigning their own mass media which is definitely educational is also good step.

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