Kimgrey
Mar 9, 2016
Writing Feedback / Travelling is a sweet escape from stressful life - and the best is sharing joy with a loving family [5]
Some prefer travelling with companion others prefer to travel alone. What do you think better?
Travelling is a sweet escape from stressful life. Many workers allotted time just to travel to unwind and also, to see how wonderful the world is. Some of them choose to travel alone and some wants to have a companion. These essay will tackle both views.
At this present time, there are lots of people who loves travelling to experience the worlds' amazing spots. Some of them, travel alone. They choose to travel by themselves to have more time to think and explore different places. Most of them are Journalist and Writers who usually travel to focus on their field of work. According to them, being alone in a trip is peaceful and they can internalize better in their writing with no conflicts from others. Further, they are uncomfortable with the presence of others.
On the other hand , there are people who used to travel with companions - a family, friends or a lover. They found it safer and comfortable. For instances, unexpected events happen along the way on their trip, they have these people who will look after them. Moreover, these kind of people are most likely enjoy interacting and communicating rather than being alone.
In my mind, both views have their own points to consider, However, I prefer to travel by group either with my own Family or with people who are close to my heart. I want to spend my time in various places together with them, because in travelling you create Memories that last forever and It makes you eager to travel more.
What band score it will get ? thank you
Some prefer travelling with companion others prefer to travel alone. What do you think better?
Travelling is a sweet escape from stressful life. Many workers allotted time just to travel to unwind and also, to see how wonderful the world is. Some of them choose to travel alone and some wants to have a companion. These essay will tackle both views.
At this present time, there are lots of people who loves travelling to experience the worlds' amazing spots. Some of them, travel alone. They choose to travel by themselves to have more time to think and explore different places. Most of them are Journalist and Writers who usually travel to focus on their field of work. According to them, being alone in a trip is peaceful and they can internalize better in their writing with no conflicts from others. Further, they are uncomfortable with the presence of others.
On the other hand , there are people who used to travel with companions - a family, friends or a lover. They found it safer and comfortable. For instances, unexpected events happen along the way on their trip, they have these people who will look after them. Moreover, these kind of people are most likely enjoy interacting and communicating rather than being alone.
In my mind, both views have their own points to consider, However, I prefer to travel by group either with my own Family or with people who are close to my heart. I want to spend my time in various places together with them, because in travelling you create Memories that last forever and It makes you eager to travel more.
What band score it will get ? thank you