nhanmi
May 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / Improved medical care. With many recent major breakthroughs in medication, humans are now accessible [4]
With many recent major breakthroughs in medication, humans are now accessible to medical care which is highly bettered over the time. All health care centers are now well-equipped with meticulous and well-qualified workforce. There are both pros and cons entailing this advancement. As far as I'm concerned, the positives may outweigh all the drawbacks.
It is undeniable that improved medical treatment means an increase in human's life expectancy. As a result, people are given more chances to fulfil their innumerable wishes and gain a lot more experiences while living. They can take the idea of trying an extreme sport into mature consideration and make a decision whether to take part in it or not. If they ultimately decide to give it a try, they might be able to discover the feeling of achieving something they have never ever plucked up the courage just to start. Even when they have made their retirement, they can still devote themselves to a firm as an advisor providing that they have an authority on a particular field. Additionally, despite their inexpertise and inexperience, they will be able to stay at home, nurturing kids or grandchildren, leading a tranquil and peaceful lifestyle with their family's whole-hearted appreciation.
However, human's life expectancy being lenghthened has a detrimental influence on social issues, overpopulation, in particular. Overpopulation is highly susceptible due to an unintended imbalance between death and birth rate. Given that governments and policies are unable to redress the balance between the two mentioned rates, human may be forced to come to terms with a large number of crisises. Unemployment is inescapable. More and more people are prone to homelessness and joblessness. Natural resources which combine with each other to create sustenance are limited. Being depleted of them because of the outburst of population means a global starvation. In addition, a multitude of people making use of transports engender traffic jam, noise, air polution contributing adversely to the enviornment.
On balance, bettered medical care helps us lead a more blissful, dedicative and adventurous life but it does harm to the population, causing numerous unsolved problems such as globle famine, unemployment, homelessness, air polution. Personally, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because when the quality of a person's life is progressed, together, we can resolve and overcome all challenges.
With many recent major breakthroughs in medication, humans are now accessible to medical care which is highly bettered over the time. All health care centers are now well-equipped with meticulous and well-qualified workforce. There are both pros and cons entailing this advancement. As far as I'm concerned, the positives may outweigh all the drawbacks.
It is undeniable that improved medical treatment means an increase in human's life expectancy. As a result, people are given more chances to fulfil their innumerable wishes and gain a lot more experiences while living. They can take the idea of trying an extreme sport into mature consideration and make a decision whether to take part in it or not. If they ultimately decide to give it a try, they might be able to discover the feeling of achieving something they have never ever plucked up the courage just to start. Even when they have made their retirement, they can still devote themselves to a firm as an advisor providing that they have an authority on a particular field. Additionally, despite their inexpertise and inexperience, they will be able to stay at home, nurturing kids or grandchildren, leading a tranquil and peaceful lifestyle with their family's whole-hearted appreciation.
However, human's life expectancy being lenghthened has a detrimental influence on social issues, overpopulation, in particular. Overpopulation is highly susceptible due to an unintended imbalance between death and birth rate. Given that governments and policies are unable to redress the balance between the two mentioned rates, human may be forced to come to terms with a large number of crisises. Unemployment is inescapable. More and more people are prone to homelessness and joblessness. Natural resources which combine with each other to create sustenance are limited. Being depleted of them because of the outburst of population means a global starvation. In addition, a multitude of people making use of transports engender traffic jam, noise, air polution contributing adversely to the enviornment.
On balance, bettered medical care helps us lead a more blissful, dedicative and adventurous life but it does harm to the population, causing numerous unsolved problems such as globle famine, unemployment, homelessness, air polution. Personally, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because when the quality of a person's life is progressed, together, we can resolve and overcome all challenges.