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Posts by shelby_l
Joined: Aug 14, 2009
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shelby_l   
Aug 14, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App - Topic of Your Choice (Willie Jack) [4]

Willie Jack is the best friend a girl could ever want. He's trustworthy, a great listener, and loves me unconditionally. Of course, the fact that Willie is a dog probably has a lot to do with these valuable traits, but seriously, he's a better person than most humans I know.

My family adopted Willie for my fifth birthday, and although he wasn't a puppy (the shelter told us he was around one-year-old), I really didn't care because he was mine. We brought him home, bought him food and toys, and soon enough, he became a part of the family.

Willie was without a doubt the greatest birthday present I have ever received. He has become such an irreplaceable part of our family that I view him as more of a brother than a family pet. Most of the time, it's simple to forget that Willie is a dog. In fact, I often tell people that he isn't; he's a little boy in a grey fur coat who happens to enjoy raw liver.

Not only has Willie taught me compassion for animals and how to care for others, but he also led me to my decision to become a veterinarian. After experiencing first hand the magical effect that pets have on their owners, I decided that becoming a veterinarian is truly the best way to give back to our furry companions.

I've always had a passion for animals, so I believe that it's only natural that I become a veterinarian. In order to develop this passion, I've worked at a veterinary clinic for a short time. Although my technical duties only entailed cleaning the kennels, doing laundry, and bathing and walking dogs, I enjoyed myself immensely and got a behind the scenes look at the animal hospital. I even got to watch surgeries if I finished all of my work in time. I also recently participated in a program at Tufts University Cummings School of Veterinary Medicine, where I sat in on lectures prepared for the program, went on field trips to zoos and animal shelters, and learned various tricks of the trade, including simple suturing and bandaging. But one of the most exciting facets of the Tufts program was the rotations, in which I shadowed a 4th year veterinary student for the day. These rotations gave me insight into what vet school is really like, and I couldn't be any more excited. Both of these experiences, working in a vet's office and attending the Tufts University summer program cemented my desire to study veterinary medicine.

Along with my interest in animals, is in interest in science itself. I've always loved nature and learning about how the world works. Every year of high school, my favorite class has always been a science. I was especially fond of my two years of marine science class because I was able to learn about an ecosystem 15 minutes away from where I live.
shelby_l   
Sep 15, 2009
Essays / "What I think about growing up" [6]

Try just writing down everything that you remember from your own childhood and growing up, whether it be good or bad. Looking at all of these things in the same place may help you to formulate your own idea about the subject.
shelby_l   
Sep 15, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App - Short Essay (Yoga) [9]

I don't really like my opening, and I'm not really sure if this is the kind of essay they're looking for. Let me know what you think, please. =]

Although I participate in an abundance of stimulating extra-curricular activities, there is none that I enjoy more than my weekly yoga class. I first began yoga in 4th grade, and immediately fell in love with it. My fondness for the practice stems not only from my natural skill in it, but also the numerous things it has given me.

Through yoga, I am able to release my everyday stress in a healthy manner, which has strengthened my body, my mind, and my overall well-being. With each downward dog, each "namaste", each meditation, I develop a closer connection with myself. Yoga class is the one time each week when I can truly separate myself from the world around me and concentrate on my needs.
shelby_l   
Sep 16, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App - Short Essay (Yoga) [9]

Downward dog is a position. Should I eliminate that so I don't confuse people?
shelby_l   
Sep 29, 2009
Essays / How do I title a summary/analysis paper? [3]

I would use the article's title (make sure to include the author) and then as a subtitle, put "An Analysis of..." and then whatever the article is about.
shelby_l   
Sep 29, 2009
Undergraduate / 'Sunny View Retirement Home' - UC PROMPT EDIT MY ESSAY [3]

Are there any special times when you were volunteering there that stand out in your mind? Recount one of those times, and tell what you learned from it or what it made you realize about yourself. Elaborate on the word games or baking. Is there a specific person at the home that you made a special connection with? Tell us about them.
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