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Name: Libby Patterson
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Last Post: Nov 16, 2016
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libbysims   
Nov 16, 2016
Undergraduate / A story about yourself that you have not already shared in your application [7]

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Thank you so much for this! The maximum count is 200 words, & I am actually at exactly 200. The reason i chose this story is because the movie,"night at the museum" was actually filmed there a year before i went. I guess i didn't do a good job at conveying that though. I want to add stuff, it is just hard since i am limited to a word count. Do you think there is anything that is unnecessary that i should take out & replace with something more eye catching?
libbysims   
Nov 16, 2016
Undergraduate / A story about yourself that you have not already shared in your application [7]

I spent the night inside the Museum of Natural History in New York. I was seven, and my mother surprised me and my brother with the trip.

We arrived at 8 p.m. I brushed my teeth with the SpongeBob toothbrush given to the kids as souvenirs. We threw our shoes off, changed into pj's, and began free roaming the museum sock-footed, Risky-Business style.

Being alone, after hours, in this enormous scene made me feel like I was in the movie, "Night at the Museum". We watched a 3D movie on black holes in the planetarium, the screen on the ceiling. Curled up underneath the stars, I gained a greater knowledge about our place in the universe. Afterward, we explored the dinosaur exhibit in total darkness, using only flashlights. Exhilarating.

We stumbled upon an unmarked door leading to a live butterfly exhibit. Alone, we observed the butterflies dancing around us in their graceful beauty. It was rebellious like the scene from "Willy Wonka", where Charlie and his grandfather sneak into the weightless bubble chamber--the moment was magical.

At "lights out" most slept under the blue whale, but I found a human-sized clam shell that did the job. There I dreamed.
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