Phuong_Loan
Dec 8, 2016
Writing Feedback / An appearance of Internet has made significant changes in the way people live [3]
@ichanpants89
Thank you for the ideas for me
@ichanpants89
Thank you for the ideas for me
Phuong_Loan
Dec 8, 2016
Writing Feedback / The pie charts reveal about the outcome of study which was conducted in 2005 and 2009 [3]
I think that the following Presa be replaced as the following:
The pie charts reveal about- > The given pie charts indicates= A quick glance at the charts indicates that
Overal l= As can be clearly illustrated by the charts
I think that the following Presa be replaced as the following:
The pie charts reveal about- > The given pie charts indicates= A quick glance at the charts indicates that
Overal l= As can be clearly illustrated by the charts
Phuong_Loan
Dec 7, 2016
Writing Feedback / An appearance of Internet has made significant changes in the way people live [3]
Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced amount of time people send...
In recent years, an appearance of the Internet has made significant changes in the way people's lives. I agree that this trend reduces a large amount of time that those spend with their friends. While I would believe that other factors, including email and messaging, should we blamed for adversely influencing people's lives. I partly agree with the given idea and believed that some other factors also impact life too.
On the one hand, depending use of the Internet devices has made people more passive and lazier. In the past, to communicate with friends, people usually got together, which took a lot of time, though, helps to keep relations. Nowadays, with the tools such as email and SMS, people don't need to go out to meet each other. They just sit at home is being able to chat with friends. It is undeniable that the distance between people more and more distant.
On the other hand, apart from the effects of the Internet which could not deny that it also brings many benefits to human life. It's been proven by experts, life is too busy if no email, Facebook that the people in the community more and farther. For example, if you are living in America where your family lives in Vietnam. While you like to meet to talk to his parents, the fastest way is through email and messaging, so email is the fastest way to get in touch with those at a distance.
All things considered, I am of my belief that there are several causes affecting the people's life. As a result, people should much spend time with their friends, then use email and SMS.
Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced amount of time people send...
In recent years, an appearance of the Internet has made significant changes in the way people's lives. I agree that this trend reduces a large amount of time that those spend with their friends. While I would believe that other factors, including email and messaging, should we blamed for adversely influencing people's lives. I partly agree with the given idea and believed that some other factors also impact life too.
On the one hand, depending use of the Internet devices has made people more passive and lazier. In the past, to communicate with friends, people usually got together, which took a lot of time, though, helps to keep relations. Nowadays, with the tools such as email and SMS, people don't need to go out to meet each other. They just sit at home is being able to chat with friends. It is undeniable that the distance between people more and more distant.
On the other hand, apart from the effects of the Internet which could not deny that it also brings many benefits to human life. It's been proven by experts, life is too busy if no email, Facebook that the people in the community more and farther. For example, if you are living in America where your family lives in Vietnam. While you like to meet to talk to his parents, the fastest way is through email and messaging, so email is the fastest way to get in touch with those at a distance.
All things considered, I am of my belief that there are several causes affecting the people's life. As a result, people should much spend time with their friends, then use email and SMS.
