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I'm applying Wageningen NFP Scholarship, review my answer for this 3 questions [5]
@pamilaadhi
Hi Pamila,
Your answer shows that you have done analysis on the health services issues and have rough images on how to solve them. However, I think there are some parts that are confusing and need more explanations.
For answer no. 1:
... expected to grow close to
14% by 2019. An
estimated 260 million Indonesians will be covered by BPJS Kesehatan,
provide sources from where you get these numbers.From your answer, I assume there are four problems
Problem 1: increasing need of healthcare technology innovation, ontime supplies and well managed services including skilled manpower
Problem 2: speed up healthcare product procurement process
Problem 3: This increasing demand specifically, what kind of health services demanded? whereas
ageing and lifestyle changes what kind of life style changes and how should the healthcare organization response to those? of an entire population ...
Problem 4:In addition,
unbalance unbalance is too board and has ambiguous meaning, so specifically, what do you mean by unbalance? innovation and management ...
For answer no. 2:
Good management from the first step until end of process with ...
I think this is too board, for one solution to settle all problems mentioned in no. 1>> By taking master in
life science management Wageningen University and Research (WUR), You mentioned different master course later in your answer for no. 3.gap the world of management, innovation and entrepreneurship on ...
I notice that this was taken from the WUR web, I suggest you to change the wording and collaborate the sentences more, for reference you can look up the synonym here -> thesaurus.comIt covers managerial, economic, sociological and environmental aspects of ...
It will better if you mentioned how the study not just covers the mentioned aspects but also provide specific skills and knowledge you will gain that important to address the problems in no. 1 answer.perform some creative work surely in
managing both financial and resource inside in reforming Indonesia.
If you think by managing financial and resources can help to address the health issues in no.1, please provide more correlation. If you only provide this sentence alone like this, I am afraid this will cause confusion to the readers.For answer no. 3:
>> As a graduate from
Master in Management, Economics and ...it will enable me to face the
future challenge of AFTA in 2020 This problems doesn't mentioned previously in no. 1As I did before, with all of Pertamina ...
How your past achievement able to solve the health issues?I believe by giving my best shoot during my graduate program it ...
I think this part isn't required at all. It shows how motivated you are in this matter but it will be better to convey the practical and specific solutions you have in mind.