emilyle206
Dec 31, 2016
Undergraduate / Operation: Duke Supplementary Essay For Trinity College of Arts & Sciences! [10]
@Holt
Hi!
Thank you for your feedback. So should I take out the mentioning of the game of operation and focus more on Duke? My only problem is that I don't really know how to start the essay that would make it creative and pique the admissions interest. I didn't know if I should have just gone straight to the point for the essay since I thought it could've been awkward. Ahhh I wish the 150 limit was actually 250! I will try to do revisions soon.
@Holt
Hi!
Thank you for your feedback. So should I take out the mentioning of the game of operation and focus more on Duke? My only problem is that I don't really know how to start the essay that would make it creative and pique the admissions interest. I didn't know if I should have just gone straight to the point for the essay since I thought it could've been awkward. Ahhh I wish the 150 limit was actually 250! I will try to do revisions soon.