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Name: Ahmed Sanad
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Last Post: Feb 1, 2017
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Ahmed_Sanad   
Feb 1, 2017
Undergraduate / Me, as a part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporations [14]

@Holt
Thanks for your comment, I tried to specify the point you mentioned.
Waiting for your kind reply and support as usual.

After MBA graduation, I'll join planning team as a Sr. Planning Engineer in Siemens corporation, where I already proved my capabilities during my early presence in the company in the role of project engineer. Then, during my second position at the corporation, I'll strive to make an impression upon my reporting manager to get a promotion to be planning team leader. At my third year in planning career, I'll celebrate being the newest planning manager within the division. By the fourth year, I'll join executive team as a junior planning manager. This will give me the opportunity to be part of the strategic planning board of the corporation. Depending on my capabilities, I'll catch the eye of senior executives who will entitle me for more complicated tasks that will prove my ability to deliver strategic planning affecting the corporation steering and directions. Finally, I'll be a valuable member of the strategic planning board with my fifth year with the company; meanwhile I'll be able to support Africa especially in planning for infrastructure refurbishment, supporting more reliable energy using more renewable sources, which will help the environment to keep intact and more hospitals, schools & factories can be built.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 30, 2017
Undergraduate / Me, as a part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporations [14]

@Holt
Many thanks for your comments and feedback to reach such an essay,
But can you elaborate more regarding this part ? unfortunately i didn't what do you mean.
Sorry for inconvenience.

One point for adjustment though, since your leadership skills need to have a community, national, or international influence on the company, try to insert a reference to one of the three in the sentence where you speak of steering the company direction. That should make an acceptable reference or response to that particular prompt requirement. It will be obvious to the reviewer that you have a solid career plan but that the influence of your career on a particular sector will all depend upon where the planning committee plans to to direct the interests of the company in five years.

do you mean to mention an example on how to steer and affect the corporation directions towards something ?
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 29, 2017
Undergraduate / Me, as a part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporations [14]

@Holt
I modified it based on all your comments, thanks to have a look on it and feedback me:

After MBA graduation, I'll join planning team as a Sr. Planning Engineer in Siemens corporation, where I already proved my capabilities during my early presence in the company in the role of project engineer. Then, during my second position ...
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 29, 2017
Undergraduate / Me, as a part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporations [14]

@Holt
Dear Holt,
find below my updated draft, I updated it based on your comments:

I still remember my last year at college; I was the president of a student activity leading more than 60 people toward one target. This is how I always visualize myself as part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporate, setting long term targets followed by tactics. That's why I found that studying project management is the first tactic, so I became PMP and IPMA certified. Then I studied risk management and planning. During this journey, I became pretty sure that financial studies are very important part of any corporate plan or decision. So, I applied for MBA scholarship to be equipped with needed weapons to be able to take the right decisions in proper time. During my MBA program, I'll get ton of organizational and management knowledge, which I already did when I was student activity president, but this was more based on my managerial skills not managerial knowledge, but leading corporate needs both skills and knowledge to excel. Strategic planning is my passion, where I find myself curious and happy while doing. I do believe that within the next 5 years after finishing my MBA, I'll be an added value in this capacity.

@gayan1991
Thanks for your comments,
I removed the confusing part, thanks to review the new one and give me your comments or inputs.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 29, 2017
Undergraduate / Me, as a part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporations [14]

Dear All,
I need your support in my below essay reply.

Describe your long-term career plans.
Including your contribution to your community, your country or to the world. If applicable to the fellowship you are in, your background would be an evidence of your leadership capacity and/or potential (up to a maximum of 200 words).


Working in the strategic planning



I always visualize myself as part of the strategic planning board of one of the multinational corporate, this will never happen without working hard to reach it, one of my best inspirations in this is Chris Gardner story - "Pursuit of Happiness" the movie. Working in strategic planning requires corporate management skills. And every strategy needs tactics to achieve; those tactics are simply my day-to-day actions. Starting from being an experienced professional project manager, managing complex projects within the firm, and then managing different projects as a project director. After that moving to core business financial position, so I have to be totally able to track all financial records and transactions within the corporate, controlling expenditure, assets and liabilities. After that, I'll be part of the whole image and would be able to think more strategically with all tools I have on the theoretical and practical aspects. MBA will help me to fulfill the needed prerequisites of such position. This by return will add to the community and the country. As we lack intensive planning this will be reflected on the execution of everything.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 29, 2017
Scholarship / The Reasons Of Study Preferences - I chose the Journalism Department [12]

@Deas
I think that you have to elaborate more n your intro, you got into the topic so quickly without introduction.
Second point I think you have to add evidences of being good communicator, ...etc , rather than mentioning it without proving.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 28, 2017
Scholarship / Why should you be considered a good candidate for a given fellowship? [9]

@Holt
This is the final status of my essay:

I'm someone who works hard every day to get the maximum value of it; time is a value that can't be compensated with money. Every morning I make sure that I added something new to my knowledge, I'm working as a project engineer in Siemens, enhancing my managerial skills, based on my theoretical background as certified PMP & IPM, pursuing RMP certificate. While working in project management I found that I need deep knowledge in contracts management, so I enrolled in contract management program (CLAC) which will enable me to excel more in this area. I'm a persistent caliber who is always working on myself to be better than the one I was yesterday. I'm a multitasking talented engineer working on many things simultaneously. I'm studying for my Masters degree in electrical engineering, RMP certificate, finalized my IPMA certificate and studying for GMAT & CLAC programs. I'm the best fit for such an opportunity which I can make the best out of within a very short time.

Do you think it has a good intro ? or the first sentence needs to be rephrased ? as I mentioned that I'm hard worker at the beginning, which may not be preferred from reviewers.

@utsi

Have a look on the final draft please.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 28, 2017
Scholarship / Electrical engineer, with strong technical background - academic qualifications and study objectives [3]

Dear All,
I need your feedback and inputs regarding my essay as an answer for below question.
Thanks in advance for your reply.

Describe your academic qualifications and study objectives.
And how you plan to apply your studies (up to a maximum of 200 words)


corporate support and career progression



I'm an electrical engineer, with a strong solid technical background which was shown on both academic and professional aspects; I was working in technical position in oil & gas (Halliburton) which proved my technical capabilities as I got the senior position in a very short time solving hard technical issues in a field that wasn't my major study in faculty, meanwhile I was studying for my masters degree where I studied 10 courses then dig deep to select the point of research which is in line with the corporate where I'm working now (Siemens). Apart from my technical academic qualifications, I also achieved several milestones in professional academic qualifications starting from TQM, PMP, IPMA, RMP and CLAC (In progress). All those activities are part of a big roadmap I put in order to be part of the change I want in the world. Being well qualified in everything will support achieving perfection in all positions. I do believe that if I got this fellowship I'll be able to take right decisions based on knowledge I acquired in MBA, which in return will support the corporate I'm working for and expedite my career progression.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 28, 2017
Undergraduate / From a homebody to the active body. UW Madison Essay -- Something important but unnoticed [19]

@barney
I do like your essay so much, it puts me in an atmosphere where i started to imagine the morning walk and how it could change people's life

you only have to make sure that you are on the right track of selecting such a topic as unnoticed one, unnoticed by whom ? i find this a little confusing to me.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 28, 2017
Scholarship / Academic Interests Essay (Scholarship) - to pursue a degree in political science [5]

@rowliejohnflores
From your introduction , i felt lost a little, i didn't know what are your targets,
i know that you want to prove to reviewers that you are so flexible, but this is a thin line between being flexible and being distracted.

I think this will affect their impression about you.
this is my opinion.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 26, 2017
Scholarship / Why should you be considered a good candidate for a given fellowship? [9]

Dear All,
I need your support In revising, modifying or adding to my below statement applying for MBA scholarship.

1-Why should you be considered a good candidate for a given fellowship?
You should include your particular qualifications, skills and interest that are relevant to the award (up to a maximum of 200 words).


I'm the best fit for such an opportunity



Fellowship is all about supporting people eager to acquire more knowledge they can't afford, supporting calibers to achieve the extra mile they deserve. I'm someone who works hard every day to get the maximum value of it; time is a value that can't be compensated with money. Every morning I make sure that I added something new to my knowledge, I'm working as a project engineer in Siemens, enhancing my managerial skills, based on my theoretical background as certified PMP & IPM, pursuing RMP certificate. While working in project management I found that I need deep knowledge in contracts management, so I enrolled in contract management program (CLAC) which will enable me to excel more in this area. I'm a persistent caliber who is always working on myself to be better than the one I was yesterday. I'm a multitasking talented engineer working on many things simultaneously. I'm studying for my Masters degree in electrical engineering, RMP certificate, finalized my IPMA certificate and studying for GMAT & CLAC programs, adding to that I'm married with 2 kids. I'm the best fit for such an opportunity which I can make the best out of within a very short time.
Ahmed_Sanad   
Jan 26, 2017
Scholarship / Being in Oil&Gas taught me a lot. MBA Admission Essay. [2]

Dear All,
I need your reply and support regarding my below Personal Statement, thanks in advance for your kind support.

developing myself



September 15, 2007, I still remember my first day at Ain Shams university, Faculty of Engineering, that day when I attended my first lecture conducted by one of our best mathematicians, then I attended physics lecture, to know more about point charges & electrons. And how you can spend the rest of your life studying and working on something that you never saw, which seems to be rocket science for those who are not obsessed by that science.

On that day, I became sure that it's all about belief, strong enthusiasm, and self-actualization.
I was chasing opportunities, I joined several student activities, worked as publications member, IT member & Public relations member.
Then decided to get out of my comfort zone, so I became a fundraiser. Persuading several companies' top management to sponsor our student activity as part of their corporate social responsibility.

I still remember the nights I spent preparing business plans and proposals to get the fund for our activity. After that, I applied for the student activity presidential elections, which allowed me for the first time to be the leader of 63 persons from different faculties, not just engineering. Some of the candidates were older than me and have more experience, but I beat them by the well prepared realistic presidential plan, reinforced by "how-to" implement every and each item.

All those experiences added to my character and gave me a very broad exposure that distinguished me from my peers. This experience supported me to get Internships in best multinational companies in their respective fields, as I got internship at Procter & Gamble working in capital management department for 3 months, working on a very important project with critical and reliable results. Then I got another internship at Siemens, which was planned to be only for 1 month, but I was selected among 3 out of 24 trainees to get an extension to spend 8 months after graduation with the company rotating between Project management to Commissioning and testing engineer.

During this period, I got an offer from another multinational company working in Oil&Gas field, which is Halliburton, where I spent 3 years, learning a lot of skills, as my role was a problem-solving job, starting from networks, mechanical & electrical problems, with a lot of constraints and lack of resources.

Being in Oil&Gas taught me a lot about flexibility, stress management and multi-tasking, and due to my fast learning ability and reliable work results, I got the seniority title just in 1 year proving my capabilities and technical knowledge in the field, although it was expected to be achieved within more than 3 years.

During all that I enrolled in masters degree in Ain Shams University, where I got 3.6 GPA in the pre-masters, and got the point of research about "Fault Location Estimation in Smart Grids" which is not a common topic to dig deep in, and needs more and more research effort to get valuable outcome, and now I'm finalizing my research and compiling all the results I got into a conclusion.

In the backstage of all that, I was developing in myself to gain the self-actualization mentioned before.
That's why I worked hard on project management area, then I got PMP certificate, which opened new gates to my career progression.
And due to my good feedback in Siemens when I was in my internship with them for 8 months, I got an offer from their side to join the project management team as a deputy Project Manager (Project Engineer) to contribute in the Mega-Projects taking place nowadays in Egypt. So, I accepted the offer considering it a new challenge to join a new career where I can prove myself as I did in the Oil&Gas one.

Then I got my IPMA certificate, and I ranked 1st among the exam attendees.
And within my first year in Siemens, I became the champion of several tools, starting from projects financial reporting, progress reporting, & risk management tools. All that gave me an exposure to top management responsibilities and duties that plays a key role in giving me more macro management skills and mindset.

Necessity is the mother of invention, a key important starting point now in my career progression, as I need several skills and knowledge, which I already deal with on a daily basis, but I do believe that theoretical background is the base of application, and after that you can innovate, create & think out of the box.

That's why I do believe that MBA offered by the AUC is the best approach now to get equipped with the most important business knowledge to be able to fight more obstacles and to add more value to myself, my community and my corporate.

People are the most valuable asset that should be maintained and developed in the whole world, and then they will impress you by their ability to turn sand into gold.
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