Thu Pham
Feb 1, 2017
Graduate / On my way to the Master's program in Digital Marketing in Smurfit School [4]
Thanks a ton for your comments. I am revising my essay to make it look better. :)
@Holt
It is a part of the two essay questions that I have to submit in the online application form. It actually acts as a personal statement.
Regarding the third paragraph, personally, I think the multi-culture environment is also a strong motivation for me to enroll in Smurtfit. At the same time, I am also convinced by your suggestion to make my career plan more details to enhance my study interest. It's hard to include all in a 300-word essay. :(
I've just emailed the admission team to check if it is feasible to upload a personal statement with longer than 300 words, instead of following the fixed requirement of the default question of the online form. If not, I will consider to make priority between the two ideas.
Thanks again for your feedback.
Thanks a ton for your comments. I am revising my essay to make it look better. :)
@Holt
It is a part of the two essay questions that I have to submit in the online application form. It actually acts as a personal statement.
Regarding the third paragraph, personally, I think the multi-culture environment is also a strong motivation for me to enroll in Smurtfit. At the same time, I am also convinced by your suggestion to make my career plan more details to enhance my study interest. It's hard to include all in a 300-word essay. :(
I've just emailed the admission team to check if it is feasible to upload a personal statement with longer than 300 words, instead of following the fixed requirement of the default question of the online form. If not, I will consider to make priority between the two ideas.
Thanks again for your feedback.