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Feb 21, 2017
Writing Feedback / Artificial environments. Positive and negative sides of zoos [4]
@adamrahimov
The paragraph that discusses was too short in my view. Merely stating that zoos have noticeable advantages does not sound convincing.
@adamrahimov
The paragraph that discusses was too short in my view. Merely stating that zoos have noticeable advantages does not sound convincing.