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Mar 6, 2017
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : Life now is better today than it was century ago [3]

advantages of the modern life



Nowadays our lifestyle is different than past. Translation has improved, Medical sciences developed constantly, communication facilities has blast evolved. Our life is more various and better than it was 100 years ago.

Now we can take an air plant to go every country to enjoy the local food, it is difficult to do in hundred years ago. Even the empire or king has not done that in their whole life. Everyone can life as a king now.

By the Medical improved, Most of disease can be cured and treated. Our life can be have more hope and comfortable than before. For example: when I catch a cold and have a fever. There has a instance medicine can let me rapid recovery. If this situation is in the past 100 years ago, maybe I would die or become idiot.

People can use communication facilities to easy connect a person who living in other part of world. The cost is cheaper than it was a hundred years ago.

Now, I am enjoyed these convenient and used to this modern life, I can't image to go back in the past of 100 years ago.
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