fufuleilei
Mar 16, 2017
Student Talk / Is it necessary to learn English? [38]
If you don't learn English, how to data girls from all other contries. LOL
If you don't learn English, how to data girls from all other contries. LOL
fufuleilei
Mar 15, 2017
Writing Feedback / TOEFL independent writing task 1. A new restaurant may be built in your neighorhood. [3]
@Holt
Hi, Mary
Thank you soooo much! And your advice is very important to me. I will practice a lot to avoid these mistakes.
@Holt
Hi, Mary
Thank you soooo much! And your advice is very important to me. I will practice a lot to avoid these mistakes.
fufuleilei
Mar 14, 2017
Writing Feedback / TOEFL independent writing task 1. A new restaurant may be built in your neighorhood. [3]
My first TOEFL indepentdent writing training.
A new restaurant may be built in your neighorhood. Support or opposite this plan?
The number of the substantial services near a community ia an important target to evaluate the people's living standards who living there. One requirement of these services is that they should be convenient. From this viewpoint, I definitely agree if a restaurant is built in my neighbourhood.
This new comming "neighbour" can make my family and I eat food whenever we want. It's time saving. We won't need to drive a long way to find a restaurant and suffer from the terrible traffic. This will especially benefit my parents because they are a little old for long time driving. Also, if my family getting familiar with people who are working in this restaurant near my home,they are more likely to take care of my parents when I am working. And they will fulfill my tastes and other demands. Thus they will serve me better than those restaurants far away from my house.
Apart from the benifits to my family, this resaurant can taken as a good social place. Because my neighbours will eat there, I can always meet them outside my house. Sharing happiness and making friends with new neighbours. We may have same interests on what's happenning in our community. If anyone needs help, I can give a hand.
Although this restaurant may make noise and smoke, as long as it obey the related regulations, I will accept it as my new 'neighbour'.
My first TOEFL indepentdent writing training.
A new restaurant may be built in your neighorhood. Support or opposite this plan?
A new, substantial service
The number of the substantial services near a community ia an important target to evaluate the people's living standards who living there. One requirement of these services is that they should be convenient. From this viewpoint, I definitely agree if a restaurant is built in my neighbourhood.
This new comming "neighbour" can make my family and I eat food whenever we want. It's time saving. We won't need to drive a long way to find a restaurant and suffer from the terrible traffic. This will especially benefit my parents because they are a little old for long time driving. Also, if my family getting familiar with people who are working in this restaurant near my home,they are more likely to take care of my parents when I am working. And they will fulfill my tastes and other demands. Thus they will serve me better than those restaurants far away from my house.
Apart from the benifits to my family, this resaurant can taken as a good social place. Because my neighbours will eat there, I can always meet them outside my house. Sharing happiness and making friends with new neighbours. We may have same interests on what's happenning in our community. If anyone needs help, I can give a hand.
Although this restaurant may make noise and smoke, as long as it obey the related regulations, I will accept it as my new 'neighbour'.
