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Posts by cheniki
Name: cheniki
Joined: Mar 19, 2017
Last Post: Mar 19, 2017
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cheniki   
Mar 19, 2017
Writing Feedback / (Russian National Exam) Agree or disagree? The clothes people wear influence their behavior [7]

alinavaky , you have to write the question in order to have an idea,
however, as far as i read your essay, what i see is that you defended both of the sides, i think you should stick on side. this is clearer and not confusing.

secondly, ''Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with the second statement, because, in my opinion, ... here you stated ur opinion again , but have done it at the beginning
cheniki   
Mar 19, 2017
Writing Feedback / The honesty importance in a relationship [3]

Do you agree or disagree?
Telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship


Relationship's pilar



There are many considerations and pillars in building any relationship. Depending on their opinions, people have different visions on which consideration is the number one on the list. For me, Absolutely, I am for telling the truth, which is most needed and the top pillar in any relationship.

For me, telling the truth is considered as the most necessary pillar in all of my life.
Here, if my truthful friend did a mistake and he admitted it, I have to forgive him on any way. No doubt that such situations between friends or couples strengthen their relationship and make it last for the whole life. In Addition, being truthful creates and boosts the self confidence and bravery. For example, I have seen many cases whereby I avoid lying on others, that I feel more confidence, and I have nothing to worry about, because I am on the right way. Unlike the liar who is always freaking out and his face becomes yellow while he is talking.

On the other side, Hiding the truth is the destroyer of any relationship. When I want to build a new friendship, the question comes first is: ''is this person really honest and truthful? So that I can trust him''. If he seems to be dishonest then how would I rely on him later on?. that he might be lying on me all the time.

Also, our relationship is going to meet an end whether I disclose his lies earlier or later. Because his hidden real personality is going to betrayed. Moreover, He is going to be ignored by other, since he has no reliability. No one want to have a fake friend who just pretends to be a friend.
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