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Mar 19, 2017
Writing Feedback / (Russian National Exam) Agree or disagree? The clothes people wear influence their behavior [7]
alinavaky , you have to write the question in order to have an idea,
however, as far as i read your essay, what i see is that you defended both of the sides, i think you should stick on side. this is clearer and not confusing.
secondly, ''Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with the second statement, because, in my opinion, ... here you stated ur opinion again , but have done it at the beginning
alinavaky , you have to write the question in order to have an idea,
however, as far as i read your essay, what i see is that you defended both of the sides, i think you should stick on side. this is clearer and not confusing.
secondly, ''Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with the second statement, because, in my opinion, ... here you stated ur opinion again , but have done it at the beginning