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Mar 25, 2017
Writing Feedback / "The importance of biodiversity" task 2 writng module IELTS [4]
"Biodiversity importance is being more widely recognized as increasing the numbers of species under threat"
Biodiversity importance is being more widely recognized as increasing the numbers of species under threat. How to protect them is the scope of the many campaigns in order to protect and increase their presence much more. Solutions must be suggested in order to establish and help preserveincreasing the biodiversity. In this essay I'll argue some suggestions introduced.
In a way to protect the already present rare species either animal or plants we need to launch more campaigns that would take care in increasing awareness about the threat coming of losing such species. As young kids being new to such concept and may not know what's the importance of biodiversity to their future life, it's quite needed to discuss the importance of biodiversity to their future planet in their lessons; going to camps and let them know about these plants and animals threatened more closer. However people may disagree that getting deep in such subject in their children lesson as it's considered a waste of time and more important subject need to be discussed.
Other solutions suggested is by provide a major protection for animals as being an important part of biodiversity. One way suggested is by building natural open zoos where they can live and reproduce naturally simulating their original occurring habitats. These zoos must be protected against hunting, no people can live there as it may contain dangerous animals to be lived with. Moreover, a specialized units in nursery and doctors must present. This can be done for plants in the same manner as having them in unique agricultural media where they can be protected and reproduced without any external threat.
At the end, these suggestions should be considered as preserving biodiversity is essential to keep this planet works normally as it used to before our presence. On the other hand, we don't see that attention given to such important topic instead we see a careless acts and negligence from both government and people toward keeping what's destroyed before. More attention must be given and more acts must be organized to have a healthier planet.
"Biodiversity importance is being more widely recognized as increasing the numbers of species under threat"
What can be done to maintain biodiversity?
Biodiversity importance is being more widely recognized as increasing the numbers of species under threat. How to protect them is the scope of the many campaigns in order to protect and increase their presence much more. Solutions must be suggested in order to establish and help preserveincreasing the biodiversity. In this essay I'll argue some suggestions introduced.
In a way to protect the already present rare species either animal or plants we need to launch more campaigns that would take care in increasing awareness about the threat coming of losing such species. As young kids being new to such concept and may not know what's the importance of biodiversity to their future life, it's quite needed to discuss the importance of biodiversity to their future planet in their lessons; going to camps and let them know about these plants and animals threatened more closer. However people may disagree that getting deep in such subject in their children lesson as it's considered a waste of time and more important subject need to be discussed.
Other solutions suggested is by provide a major protection for animals as being an important part of biodiversity. One way suggested is by building natural open zoos where they can live and reproduce naturally simulating their original occurring habitats. These zoos must be protected against hunting, no people can live there as it may contain dangerous animals to be lived with. Moreover, a specialized units in nursery and doctors must present. This can be done for plants in the same manner as having them in unique agricultural media where they can be protected and reproduced without any external threat.
At the end, these suggestions should be considered as preserving biodiversity is essential to keep this planet works normally as it used to before our presence. On the other hand, we don't see that attention given to such important topic instead we see a careless acts and negligence from both government and people toward keeping what's destroyed before. More attention must be given and more acts must be organized to have a healthier planet.
