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Posts by Muhammad Yoki [Suspended]
Name: Mechanical engineering
Joined: May 11, 2017
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School: University of Sumatera Utara

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Muhammad Yoki   
May 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Parents often let their children play a lot with computer and tablets in order to improve skills [3]

Nowaday, parents often let their children play a lot with computer and tablets in order to improve their technological skills. Do the advantages of the use of these device from an early age outweight the disadvantages.

The usage of technology has influenced human's life, whilst it cannot be denied that has many benefit. These day, the vicinity of parents permit their children to use technology like computer or tablets in the long-time using with the reason that will be sophisticated children about technology. According to the reason, I tend to think that it may have a profits of their children, but the usage it should be cared by parents.

First of all, The technology help to accelerate learning process for children. Indirectly, they will be easier to access the information relating their study which might help in their work as a student later. A good case in the recently years, the parents wish that children should be able to independent study, due to the majority of parents will be busy by their work in the work place. Therefore, the presence of computer completed by cutting-edge application providing study-online through the application such as educational web, Skype as well as the others. However, avoiding the appropriation of computer, the parent role is a very profound necessary, since parent should control tablet use of their children. Hence, children are able to use wisely and obtain a lot of feedback from it.

Secondly, giving the chance to children to explore knowledge through available computer. Generally, in the childhood, they want to looking for new experience which is not knew by them. As a result, through utilizing of the gadget, they can build a new idea and experience only a click button's gadget. To show an example, Nowadays, many children have predominant pretension about outside of the world such the space, animal and plant world, whereas their parent do not understand about it. Hence, the vicinity of parents use tablet or computer to teach about it, commonly they utilize computer's application like You Tube, Google and the others providing videos and visual-graphics. As a result, many children prefer and more spirit to study.

Ultimately, the utilizing of computer have an tremendous profit of the growth of children's knowledge that will be master about technology and science. Furthermore, parent play a part of gadget use, as a result they can avoid an appropriation of computer.
Muhammad Yoki   
May 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Essay ielts task 2 (Improve technolgical skill) [3]

@Rianda Ridho

You should write : Gadgets offering technology to create live.
Additionally, you should pay attention to a capital word and punctuation.
Muhammad Yoki   
May 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Progress Report English Course [6]

@Irmadesyre
my score was decline significantly
You should : My score declined significantly
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