xujiantao
May 15, 2017
Writing Feedback / It's a short story about a aunt and his nephew. [3]
@Holt
Thanks for your help and your advice,I knew about that, but I'm a beginner,I wrote this story mainly for practce my new words and new grammar. I can't write more colorful,interesting now, but I'll do my best to learn more.
Thanks again!
@Holt
Thanks for your help and your advice,I knew about that, but I'm a beginner,I wrote this story mainly for practce my new words and new grammar. I can't write more colorful,interesting now, but I'll do my best to learn more.
Thanks again!