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Name: Maria Agada
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Jun 13, 2017
Letters / Im still here if you want to know me - Stanford roommate essay [4]

I would like to answer the Stanford essay prompt. I have the first few paragraphs down but I dont know how to continue. Here is it

first experience of the usa



Prompt: Write a note to future roommate to help them know you and (us too)

Dear Roomie,
I'd text but my phone is charging right now, so I decided to keep it old school and write a letter.
If you are reading this, you probably woke up from my alarm clock, I'm still trying to work that thing. I'm totally sorry so I decided to grab you breakfast - If you don't mind though and it will still be hot when I get back.

First things first ,I'm the realest but I'm also an only child, please I'm begging, don't believe those stereotypes about us being stingy, lonely and stuff like that. I actually have friends, not a thousand of them but close intimate friends that I actually care about and congrats because you are one of them

This will actually be my first time in the United States and I would love to have my first experience with you and maybe I will buy a camera to capture fun memories together and make funny roomie videos just like Cath in College. Before you get pissed at my constant taking of pictures and go for a roommate change, please hear me out.

I wanted to begin describing Stanford at this point and connect it with me and my roomie connecting as really good friends but i dont know how to.

I really need help and you can critique the essay - show no mercy to it

I am also a Nigerian, so can I add that to the essay
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