dexterloax
Jun 26, 2017
Letters / Cover letter for study permit in Canada at Cape Breton University [4]
Ok, so I rewrote the whole letter. I think this time it has been improved a little. Can you please help me check it? thank you very much
Tran The Thong
457A/23 Nhat Tao St, Ward 6, District 10
Tel: 01227847014 - Email: dexterloax@gmail.
Visa Officer
The Canadian Embassy
Visa Section
Ho Chi Minh, Vietnam.
D/M/Y
Dear Visa Officer,
My name is Tran The Thong. I wish to apply for a study permit. I was accepted to Cape Breton University spring 2018 transfer program. I am transferring my third-year credits in Mechatronics at Eastern International University to Manufacturing at Cape Breton University due to Mechatronics being a broader major. I would be studying for two years at Cape Breton for a Bachelor Degree in Manufacturing.
Vietnam is a developing country and we are expecting a rise in the need for automation machines for the next fifty years. By learning Manufacturing in an already developed country I can guaranteed to have the latest knowledge to be on the front when I return to work in Vietnam. Furthermore, if I decided to apply for a job at large Enterprises such as Mitsubishi Motors, FANUC or Kawasaki, I would need an advanced knowledge of my field, which can only be acquired by studying in Cape Breton University.
The reason I chose Cape Breton University was that after many conferences about studying overseas at U.S.A, Canada, Australia, England and Japan, Canada fits my needs and personality the most. Canada is second in education, has the reputation for having the friendliest people, was ranked the safest place in the world in 2015. It was at Canada studying conference that I was introduced to Cape Breton University. After a brief discussion with the university's representative, I decided that I would apply for a transfer program at Cape Breton University.
My parents and aunt are paying my tuition fees and my living expense as well. I was told that international students studying at Canada can work part-time at most twenty hours per week. Therefore, I can save some money for my parents and my aunt at home. I will be staying at a homestay. I have been in touch with the owner and booked it for the next two years. The first month payment has been attached to this letter for further clarification.
My plan is to finish my Bachelor Degree in Canada and return home and apply for internship at Mitsubishi Motors or Robotics 3T. My dream is to have the mark "Made in Vietnam" on robots around the world. In addition to that, with the number of on-going projects such as the North-South high-speed train system and subways in my country, the need for cheap, fast and advanced robots grows ever higher. It will provide a prime condition for me with a degree from CBU, I can almost guarantee to acquire a well-paid job in the first month that I return home. I also have a girlfriend at home and we have been together for nearly three years, so I really looking forward to showing her my degree when I get back from Canada. It would be a life changing experience for me.
I also took the liberty and asked for recommendation letters from two of my close professors who are teaching me at Eastern International University. It would serve as a better explanation on myself and my dream as a whole. I have attached them to the documents if you wish to read them. It would mean the world to me to have this opportunity and go through the one of the lifetime experience at Cape Breton University.
Thank you for your time,
Tran The Thong
Ok, so I rewrote the whole letter. I think this time it has been improved a little. Can you please help me check it? thank you very much
Tran The Thong
457A/23 Nhat Tao St, Ward 6, District 10
Tel: 01227847014 - Email: dexterloax@gmail.
Visa Officer
The Canadian Embassy
Visa Section
Ho Chi Minh, Vietnam.
D/M/Y
Dear Visa Officer,
My name is Tran The Thong. I wish to apply for a study permit. I was accepted to Cape Breton University spring 2018 transfer program. I am transferring my third-year credits in Mechatronics at Eastern International University to Manufacturing at Cape Breton University due to Mechatronics being a broader major. I would be studying for two years at Cape Breton for a Bachelor Degree in Manufacturing.
Vietnam is a developing country and we are expecting a rise in the need for automation machines for the next fifty years. By learning Manufacturing in an already developed country I can guaranteed to have the latest knowledge to be on the front when I return to work in Vietnam. Furthermore, if I decided to apply for a job at large Enterprises such as Mitsubishi Motors, FANUC or Kawasaki, I would need an advanced knowledge of my field, which can only be acquired by studying in Cape Breton University.
The reason I chose Cape Breton University was that after many conferences about studying overseas at U.S.A, Canada, Australia, England and Japan, Canada fits my needs and personality the most. Canada is second in education, has the reputation for having the friendliest people, was ranked the safest place in the world in 2015. It was at Canada studying conference that I was introduced to Cape Breton University. After a brief discussion with the university's representative, I decided that I would apply for a transfer program at Cape Breton University.
My parents and aunt are paying my tuition fees and my living expense as well. I was told that international students studying at Canada can work part-time at most twenty hours per week. Therefore, I can save some money for my parents and my aunt at home. I will be staying at a homestay. I have been in touch with the owner and booked it for the next two years. The first month payment has been attached to this letter for further clarification.
My plan is to finish my Bachelor Degree in Canada and return home and apply for internship at Mitsubishi Motors or Robotics 3T. My dream is to have the mark "Made in Vietnam" on robots around the world. In addition to that, with the number of on-going projects such as the North-South high-speed train system and subways in my country, the need for cheap, fast and advanced robots grows ever higher. It will provide a prime condition for me with a degree from CBU, I can almost guarantee to acquire a well-paid job in the first month that I return home. I also have a girlfriend at home and we have been together for nearly three years, so I really looking forward to showing her my degree when I get back from Canada. It would be a life changing experience for me.
I also took the liberty and asked for recommendation letters from two of my close professors who are teaching me at Eastern International University. It would serve as a better explanation on myself and my dream as a whole. I have attached them to the documents if you wish to read them. It would mean the world to me to have this opportunity and go through the one of the lifetime experience at Cape Breton University.
Thank you for your time,
Tran The Thong
