rodela
Jun 28, 2017
Writing Feedback / Some people say it is OK to use animals for our benefit, others say it is not good to exploit them [6]
1.Enhance our society...Wrong collocation , 2. The strongest dominant (s) 3. Lead to extinction, 4 Pou comma before it is only one 5. A sentence with because of should have 2 cluses
1.Enhance our society...Wrong collocation , 2. The strongest dominant (s) 3. Lead to extinction, 4 Pou comma before it is only one 5. A sentence with because of should have 2 cluses