maildor
Oct 4, 2017
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Nowadays working fast has more value than high precision at job? [4]
sasan, Overall nice...keep writing.
sasan, Overall nice...keep writing.
maildor
Aug 1, 2017
Writing Feedback / Reason why people sometimes prefer ride bicycle when commuting to work instead of using eg. car [4]
Hello okorobiadimma14, Thanks for your reveiw, Here are the prompt and the diagram:
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Hello okorobiadimma14, Thanks for your reveiw, Here are the prompt and the diagram:
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
maildor
Jul 31, 2017
Writing Feedback / Reason why people sometimes prefer ride bicycle when commuting to work instead of using eg. car [4]
Hello, can you check my essay please:
The first chart describe why some people cycling to work, the second one describe why others prefer driving to work.
Therese 2 main reason for way people prefer ride bicycle for 30%, first is health and fitness the second is that a bicycle is less pollution than a car, while 15% of theme prefer bicycle for it parking facility, the other 13% said that bicycle doesn't need any cost and surprisingly the last 12% considered that cycling is faster than driving.
In the other hand, the major reason for driving to work is the comfort for 40%, while 21% of people said that they prefer driving to work because of long distance, the other reason is that a car is faster than a bicycle to 14%, a similar percent said that they need to carry things to work, and lastly 11% considered the driving safer than cycling.
In general the major people prefer driving a car to work its comfort, while the main reason for cycling to work is healthy and environmental.
Thank you.
Summarise the information essay
Hello, can you check my essay please:
The first chart describe why some people cycling to work, the second one describe why others prefer driving to work.
Therese 2 main reason for way people prefer ride bicycle for 30%, first is health and fitness the second is that a bicycle is less pollution than a car, while 15% of theme prefer bicycle for it parking facility, the other 13% said that bicycle doesn't need any cost and surprisingly the last 12% considered that cycling is faster than driving.
In the other hand, the major reason for driving to work is the comfort for 40%, while 21% of people said that they prefer driving to work because of long distance, the other reason is that a car is faster than a bicycle to 14%, a similar percent said that they need to carry things to work, and lastly 11% considered the driving safer than cycling.
In general the major people prefer driving a car to work its comfort, while the main reason for cycling to work is healthy and environmental.
Thank you.
