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miss19   
Aug 24, 2017
Writing Feedback / The Ashdown Museum After and Before [5]

@eddies
Hi Eddies, I really appreciate your advice and correction, thank you for the enlightenment. It will be helpful for me, I have been learning IELTS from Youtube and you are right about "Most students start with this phrase" I used the form because everyone use it haha, I will revise my next practice essay. Once again thank you so much. God bless.
miss19   
Aug 24, 2017
Writing Feedback / The Ashdown Museum After and Before [5]

@Holt Hi Holt, thank you so much for the advise, it is important for me. God bless you. I will try harder to make it better for the next essay.
miss19   
Aug 23, 2017
Writing Feedback / The Ashdown Museum After and Before [5]

THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS THE NUMBERS OF VISITORS TO ASHDOWN MUSEUM DURING THE YEAR BEFORE AND THE YEAR AFTER IT WAS REFURBISHED. THE CHARTS SHOW THE RESULT OF SURVEYS ASKING VISITORS HOW SATISFIED THEY WERE WITH THEIR VISIT, DURING THE SAME TWO PERIODS.

Ashdown Museum visitors



My Review

The table represents the total number of visitor to Ashdown Museum between the year before and after renovation. The charts describe how different the visitor satisfaction to Ashdown museum between the year after and before renovation.

Overall, the Ashdown museum renovation was successfully taking more visitor to come, the visitor accounted for 74000 to 92000.

The year after refurbishment, the percentage of very satisfied was nearly 35% and it experienced a more then halved than before it was renovation. At the beginning before the Ashdown Museum refurbishment satisfied visitor made up to 30%, and then the figures rose to 40% after the Ashdown museum was refurbished.

The dissatisfied visitor which comprised almost a halved of results survey satisfaction the year before refurbishment, it fell down to 15% after the refurbishment. At the same year before renovation, the very dissatisfied visitor was at 10% respectively and then decreased to 5% after the renovation. On other hand, no response visitor remained constant during the same two periods.

Please feel free to comment, I will appreciate it so much.




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