minhphuc
Aug 30, 2017
Writing Feedback / [IELTS WRITING TASK 2]: A gap year between school and university [5]
Hellp hao,
In my opinion, you should change your introduction to be open.
for example: Young people always want to be success so they consistently try new things so sometimes they learn sometimes win, there is an accelerating trend of taking a gap year amongst young people. However, whether it benefits students or not has caused a heated debate and I will discuss these both sides now.
I hope it can help you
Minh Phuc
Hellp hao,
In my opinion, you should change your introduction to be open.
for example: Young people always want to be success so they consistently try new things so sometimes they learn sometimes win, there is an accelerating trend of taking a gap year amongst young people. However, whether it benefits students or not has caused a heated debate and I will discuss these both sides now.
I hope it can help you
Minh Phuc