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Name: Trần Huỳnh Minh Phúc
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Aug 30, 2017
Writing Feedback / [IELTS WRITING TASK 2]: A gap year between school and university [5]

Hellp hao,

In my opinion, you should change your introduction to be open.

for example: Young people always want to be success so they consistently try new things so sometimes they learn sometimes win, there is an accelerating trend of taking a gap year amongst young people. However, whether it benefits students or not has caused a heated debate and I will discuss these both sides now.

I hope it can help you

Minh Phuc
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