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Sep 21, 2017
Undergraduate / 'In my life, i have experienced many events that didn't': Three essays in one thread-MIT application [5]
@Holt
thanks a lot for your review. i did the second essay with what you suggested, here it is
Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (*) (100 words or fewer)
As a budding astronomer, the Astronomy program at the department of Earth, Atmospheric and Planetary science (EAPS) appeals to me the most at MIT. I have always wanted to study astronomy and become an astronomer someday. I learned about Astronomy in high school and have had an interest in that field of science since then. I have always desired to know more and discover more about outer space. Astronomy is a field of study that can never be exhausted due to our ever expanding universe, it offers knowledge needed to better humanity.
sorry for the late reply. still on the third essay.
@Holt
thanks a lot for your review. i did the second essay with what you suggested, here it is
Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (*) (100 words or fewer)
As a budding astronomer, the Astronomy program at the department of Earth, Atmospheric and Planetary science (EAPS) appeals to me the most at MIT. I have always wanted to study astronomy and become an astronomer someday. I learned about Astronomy in high school and have had an interest in that field of science since then. I have always desired to know more and discover more about outer space. Astronomy is a field of study that can never be exhausted due to our ever expanding universe, it offers knowledge needed to better humanity.
sorry for the late reply. still on the third essay.