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Henry David Thoreau wrote in The Duty of Civil Obedience: "That government is best which governs least"

Write an essay to explain the meaning of this statement and discuss what you think should be the basis for increasing or decreasing the governments power.

In his book, "The Duty of Civil Obedience," Henry David Thoreau wrote "that government is best which governs least." What the author means by this statement is that a large government is too expensive, intrusive, and bureaucratic. I wholeheartedly agree with him.

The amount of money needed to run the United States government is enormous. Reducing the size of government would reduce the overall cost and, thus, the amount of taxes people pay. The IRS alone employs thousands of workers whose positions could be eliminated entirely if a flat tax rate were adopted. Whittling down this sector of the government could potentially free up hundreds of millions of dollars in revenue, which in turn could be used to do something useful, such as reducing the national deficit.

Large governments have the tendency to become too controlling over its people. A smaller government would be less able to unduly influence people's lives. Hitler's very large and powerful government exacted control over entire countries and led to the systematic execution of more than 6 million Jewish people. If Hitler's army had not been allowed to become so large and powerful, none of this would have been able to take place.

Lastly, large governments are known to employ processes that can lead to red tape and large paper trails. Less government would mean fewer regulations and a more efficient national economy. Nearly every industrialized country in the world has access to the latest drugs and surgical procedures long before the FDA grants approval for them to be used in the United States, if ever. By reducing the number of people involved in the drug and procedure approval process, the FDA would be allowing Americans more varied choices in their healthcare.

It is clear to me that large governments tend to be detrimental to its people in many ways, including economic and personal oppression, paperwork nightmares, and bureaucratic inefficiencies. The current United States administration appears to be favoring a larger government. It is my belief that this current trend may lead to higher taxes, a reduction in personal liberty, and even more red tape.