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Name: Supapatw
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supapatw   
Nov 1, 2017
Scholarship / My journey' life that pushed me forward to be as a leader who braves to confront with any challanges [2]

@Holt
Could you please check the essay for me in 3 topics?

Thank you so much ^__^

Leadership essay



Since I was 13 years old, I went out from my home where was the starting of my journey' life that pushed me forward to be as a leader who braves to confront with any upcoming outside. From that situation, I learned from experience with leadership not only words to say what is the meaning but it will also happen by action that has more meaningful, so, my leadership came from along way of my life since I was at schools, university and until working in presents period.

As a kid, I was always afraid to express in front of people that someday I realized, I wanted to be more confident. After that the moment, I tried to join in a lot of activities. Until, when I studied in grade 8, I was chosen to be a representative of the classroom to go on the stage to demonstrate to thanks the teachers in the annual ceremony Teachers' day observation. Moreover, I was a classroom president, its were an important opportunity for me to learn how to be a leader and more self- confident.

On the one hand, when I studied in the university, I also had many opportunities, I became the head of a lot of the activities in the university not only in the classroom but it also related to other educational organization. For example, I was the representative of the university to compete for the marketing plan of Thailand by MAT(Marketing Association of Thailand) and attended in the marketing research seminar with other universities. Apart from as the representative, I had occasion hold the big seminar, I had to cooperate with organizations and businesses to invite an executive of the companies and a person who relevance to lecture, including publicized the seminar. All over the period in the university, that brought me to be the person who knew how to led people to work together happily and knew working did not from command but it was always happened by doing as a role model for colleagues.

After I graduated, I had a chance to be the representative of the company to deal with new customers that made the company revenues more than 1 million dollars in each year.

As I worked at the company, I led people who older than me to do new activities that would bring the company better, such as, design and planning the production of a new product to create extra revenue. In addition from working, on the weekends, I went to do activities about religious with communities in many provinces, I had a task to prepared places in every process and had to contact with Buddhist monks. On another hand, at the formal procedure, I was a moderator to inform the information to more than 500 peoples who attended in each time that developed my leadership to express with many people and learned how to be a good leader to handle the difficult situations.

Ultimately, I always know the experiences it provided me better, furthermore, I desire intentionally to be a good role model, to inspire people and help the communities. So, I think Chevening scholarship will give the opportunity to bring me grow up and carry me forward to be a better leader than I ever.

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supapatw   
Nov 1, 2017
Undergraduate / Essay about an experience that helped shape my character. [4]

HI, @aru1403
Let's me try to give you some suggestion, your essay is interesting, especially, sentence format described naturally.
But, I think some paragraph it does not relate to the topic, so, you can read again for revision.
Good Luck!!
supapatw   
Oct 31, 2017
Scholarship / To pursue Master of Marketing, are the University of Manchester, Southampton, and Oxford Brookes [4]

Studying in the UK - Chevening essay



There are many important reasons for study in the United Kingdom universities, so, The top three universities, which I plan to pursue Master of Marketing, are the University of Manchester, University of Southampton, and Oxford Brookes University. Significantly, the reasons I chose those three UK universities mainly because of the universities' reputation. Therefore, I truly believe that earning the master's degree in the United Kingdom will let me embrace new knowledge, skills, and experience that will hone me to thrive my future goals.

Although I graduated Marketing in a bachelor degree, got the honorable awards in the marketing competition of Thailand when I studied as a student and worked in sales and marketing field for four years had responded to traditional trade and modern trade accounts, I believe education was important to achieve in career and life due to it was a fundamental of the knowledge. Moreover, I choose to continue to study in master degree in The United State Kingdom the reason is not only there has notable by people around the globe but it is also acceptable from the businesses that lead me to intend to study in Marketing.

In addition, with the knowledge and skills obtained from the course will enhance my capabilities and handle go over any difficult situation in the future whenever I confront with. From the situation in the presents, information is changed so rapidly that it importantly needs many firms to adapt to suitably new strategies.

Hence, firstly, I have selected Master programme at the University of Manchester because it is the one largest business school and respected from other institution in the United of Kingdom, so, I have a chance to work and use my experience to exchange with other people. Next, secondly, I have also chosen the University of Southampton, it was renowned in the world and included in the Russell group organization which worked together with 24 top UK universities to improve the quality of teaching, to support research, and to build a strong network of business leader. The last one I choose, the Oxford Brookes University, it has famous over 150 years of history and notably in teaching and research, so, that will bring opportunities both in learning and education activities to persevere my long-term goals when I am the graduate.

In conclusion, I believe deeply I will gain a lot of necessary of the knowledge, skills, and experiences that will lead me to achieve my goals as a result of the course. Furthermore, I will share my experiences with others and following enhance business by co-operating between Thailand and the United State of Kingdom to be better.
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