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Nov 14, 2017
Writing Feedback / I have to write about one-day excursion - report [2]
Purposes of event
On 9th September, our group took part in the sporting event, which was taking place in honor of the day of the worker of physical education. The purpose of our participation was to do aerobics in the morning and after that watch some interesting sports competitions.
What we did
Firstly, all the students took together in the gym. Then we were doing different exercises to the music for about half an hour. After getting tired we went on lunch. Fortunately, the weather was good, so we were able to watch some football matches in the afternoon. Everyone could take part in different competitions, so we decided to play tennis for a while.
Comments
The event went perfectly, because the activities we chose were very funny and active, which created an atmosphere of the ease, so we were able to become closer and make new friends. Actually, this event was a combination of useful and enjoyable things, because we were learning to work in a team and do something new. Also, in my opinion, it is important that we were doing sports together, which was very positive for our health. Everyone was enjoyed.
the task was to write about one-day excursion and i do not know how to change this report( maybe i can add something
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Purposes of event
On 9th September, our group took part in the sporting event, which was taking place in honor of the day of the worker of physical education. The purpose of our participation was to do aerobics in the morning and after that watch some interesting sports competitions.
What we did
Firstly, all the students took together in the gym. Then we were doing different exercises to the music for about half an hour. After getting tired we went on lunch. Fortunately, the weather was good, so we were able to watch some football matches in the afternoon. Everyone could take part in different competitions, so we decided to play tennis for a while.
Comments
The event went perfectly, because the activities we chose were very funny and active, which created an atmosphere of the ease, so we were able to become closer and make new friends. Actually, this event was a combination of useful and enjoyable things, because we were learning to work in a team and do something new. Also, in my opinion, it is important that we were doing sports together, which was very positive for our health. Everyone was enjoyed.
the task was to write about one-day excursion and i do not know how to change this report( maybe i can add something
