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lyhongyen   
Nov 30, 2009
Writing Feedback / TOEFL; Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources [3]

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Should government spend more money on improving roads and highways or should government spend more money on improving public transportation ( Buses, trains,subways)?why

more funds on public transportation?



The development of public transportation is the most essential thing for a developed society. Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources , the air pollution , the loss of a sense of community. So, I think the government have to spend more money on improving it.

The use of public transportation is the best way to conserve natural resources gradually run out .Cars depend on oil and gasoline to move .If people use too many private cars , the oil and gasoline nonrenewable will run out quickly . instead of using many private cars, people can use public transportation, such as bus, train, subway, each one can get far more people and less oil and gasoline are used up per person.

The use of public transportation help in reducing the air popullion.Cars use oil and gasoline and send out gas such as carbon dioxide , heat and so on .they cause pollution and make the Earth warmer. The more cars are driven , the more pollution will be put into air .If we use the public transportation, less cars will be used and less pollution will be emitted.the atmosphere, surrounding us ,will be protected and help us more healthy.

The use of public transportation make us live more sociable.when we drive a private car ,we are alone or only our family members that we already know and lost the opportunity to make friends with others or to see that we are a part of this society.when using public transportation, we have a chance to meet more people and more chances to discovery new aspects of life.

Using public transportation has a lot of advantages for the modern society facing a lot of problems : the environmental population, the isolation in life , the depletion of natural resources.so , the government have to invest more for it and encourage people to use .
lyhongyen   
Nov 16, 2009
Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers" [13]

Hi, I am preparing for the toefl ibt and need help for the writing section.
Please give your feedback so as to get good score.
Thanks
" School should ask students to evaluate their teachers .do you agree or disagree"

In my opinion, asking students to evaluate their teachers is really a bad idea. It is very harmful for the teachers and the students themselves. It's difficult to become a reality in

Life.
students who isn't qualified enough still learn to develop their education .therefore, students make it hard to evaluate their teachers ,well- qualified and having a lot of experience in their past studying. So, they can easily figure out the answer to their students' evaluating and it's possible that the teachers can give harder questions back to their own students .

As we knew, bad students always have antipathetic attitudes towards the teachers because of the low scores which they was given. Evaluating their teachers is a good chance for them to give negative views to their teachers.

Teachers always kept an eye to find their mistakes , can't concentrate on their teaching and often become too careful and look out to their students .They can't inspire their lessons as well as before any more. It harms for the whole system of education and causes the education to lower their quality.

Whatever it happen, I believe that asking students to evaluate their teachers is very bad. It will harm the whole system of education.