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Name: Jeannie Lu
Joined: Nov 27, 2017
Last Post: Nov 27, 2017
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JeannieHo   
Nov 27, 2017
Writing Feedback / Reading reflections about artical [5]

@Holt

I am very thankful that you reply me!
I read the article in Chinese then write in English.

Actually,I still have room to improve my English : )
JeannieHo   
Nov 27, 2017
Writing Feedback / Reading reflections about artical [5]

passionate about fashion and art



Gathered many young people from all over the world who are passionate about fashion and art as well as much senior staff who have long been deep to create this dream boulevard together in the New York Fashion Ave. And from Taiwan, Paris to the New York fashion world, the model Yi Hua who lived here for eight years is one of these people. High prices and social media have fashion industry complicated in New York, Yi Hua must catch the opportunity to stabilize the economic foundation and calmly deal with the changes in the industry, and to show talent, cherish the luck, she has exquisite and unique angle to sincerely see the world and often for the observed human things by the pictures and words. The world is not fair, no matter whether New York visitors or anything, I also agree with the Yi Hua said to learn to face bravely and calmly. From the interview, I saw a woman experienced, tenacity and bravery, I think that women exude unique perseverance, very attractive! I hope I will stronger like her.

May you please help me to comment my reading reflections?
your assistance would be greatly appreciated!
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