Scholarship / Motivation Letter to pursing my advanced study - Sweden [3]

beautiful, although impoverished area

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Faiz Ahadina, born in Garut Indonesia, a region which is titled as "Swiss Van Java"" by Dutch colony in southern Indonesia because it has delightful climate and breath-taking views, which is highly marketable for both its domestic and international tourism. Ironically, it is one of Indonesia's most impoverished area with inadequate at economic and educational conditions, some improvements had been taken but the problems remain exist. This fact prompts me to write this letter in the hope of pursuing my better education in your institution. This program, I believe, is dispensable for my career development and will benefit me and my beloved city.

I took business administration for my bachelor program in Tanri Abeng Univerisity, where I had started to set up my own business in tourism sector. I help many people to visit two popular destination for Indonesian, Malaysia and Singapura, with more affordable price but still providing the same service as anyone else. Now, I already have loyal customers both group or individual. This opportunity helps me to build my leadership and interpersonal skills.

Furthermore, I was also pointed as the director of student's organization in which I supervised all student clubs can be running smoothly and the place to improve students 'abilities. Doing three activities at the same time (study, business and organization) without any issue. Prior to graduation, I had a remarkable opportunity to work as intern in the embassy of the republic of Indonesia in Sofia, Bulgaria, I was put in economic function in which I have large number of information about how economic cooperation between both parties is built and benefit one another. This also leads to join Bright Indonesia, the company assisting international business in their market entry into Indonesia, there I can implement both theoretical and practical insights I obtained to accomplish the tasks and achieve organizational goal.

In my last semester, a research project had been carried out to fulfil my bachelor requirement. it reveals that Indonesian government needs to diversify its export destination to boost national income because of low-national income from exporting to major country destinations. Therefore, I suggest the government to start focusing on non-traditional market which has not been explored deeply, such as Bulgaria.

I think of pursuing my master at your university is a logical step ahead for me and that it will directs me to find my long-term goals. I believe this university is one of the best Swedish universities, where that would form a deep foundation for my future career development. Your institution comes on top of my priorities for pursuing my International Business program. I am aware that this university is a vibrant and exciting institution that is renowned for its high standards of teaching, its strong and supportive atmosphere for study and research. After completing this program, I will give positive contributions to strengthen Swedish and Indonesian bilateral cooperation in various sectors and thus contribute to the nation's economic growth between both parties and also will help tourism sector in my city will be more popular with my great experience in tourism sector.

Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to receiving your favourable communication.

Yours sincerely,

Please give me feedback to make it perfect!!!! Thanks in advance

Scholarship / Recommendation Letter for Applying for Master in International Business Program [2]

future renowned entrepreneur

Dear Admissions Committee,

It is a tremendous honor to offer a formal recommendation for Faiz Ahadina in his admission to your business school program. For the last two years, I have taught him as my student at Tanri Abeng University. I am completely mesmerized by his high-achievement, both in and out of the classroom, which he informs through his critical thinking rarely owned by Indonesian as well as starting his Tour and Travel Agency while studying at college. It opens the way to enlarge his hands-on experience in operations management, forming his interpersonal qualities, and cultivating his leadership aptitude. I can say with great certainty that Faiz is one of the most exceptional students I have ever encountered.

Faiz is well-known as industrious and humble person, the characters that help him to easily mingle with his peers and get trusted from others. His internship program was truly impressive, gaining experience to work with such great diplomats at the embassy of the republic of Indonesia in Sofia, broadening his mind about bilateral relationship of both nations. This also encouraged him to carried out exhaustive research on market entry analysis of an Indonesian furniture company into Bulgaria, in which he revealed several striking findings in terms of political and sociocultural, economic infrastructure as well as trade barriers.

Because of his advantages, I hire him to work with me as my Senior Consultant at Bright Indonesia, which is a market entry development specialist assisting International companies into Indonesia. In the company, he convincingly demonstrated strong interpersonal skills and the leadership capabilities compulsory for his successful career in the future. He handsomely contributed to attain many goals through his constructive comments as well as his entrepreneurial mindset truly demanded in start-up company like mine. For example, Faiz helped to seek Indonesian potential distributors for our client from Catalonia Trade Investment and being a tour guide for their business trip in Indonesia as well. Because of his contribution, my client felt highly satisfied with the service we provided.

Due to a great number of reasons above, I firmly recommend Faiz Ahadina as a candidate for your business program. I truly believe this program will be boon for his future, and someday a renowned entrepreneur whom you would be glad to call him as alumni. If you have any inquiries, please kindly send me a message at primadi.ws@brightindonesia.net

Sincerely,

Primadi W Soerjosoemanto, Managing Partner, Bright Indonesia