Undergraduate / "A different language is a different vision of life". My vision of life changed in the USA [3]

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gwu - studying abroad essay

Federico Fellini said, "A different language is a different vision of life". My vision of life changed when I moved to the United States.

I have been learning English since was seven. I also started learning German when I was thirteen. I spent a lot of time learning the languages at school, extracurricular language activities, and I was always taking high places in competitions. When I had to leave my homeland, Poland, and move to the United States, I did not have any problems with the language. Due to my knowledge of languages, I expanded my horizons.

I think George Washington University gives students huge opportunity to study abroad where they can gain experience and improve their language skills. I know how important is knowing a language nowadays. Knowing a foreign language plays a huge role in my future job which is a commercial pilot.

As a future college student, I find George Washington University as a perfect place for developing my curiosity. I cannot wait to start a new path in my future. I know that the best way to learn a foreign language is by spending time abroad so I plan to use the study abroad opportunity. Because I able to communicate in three languages I know how much it helps in my life. I believe George Washington University will have a great impact on my life transforming me into a better person.

Undergraduate / Why do you choose Boston University - BU prompt; strong connection and bond with this school [2]

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Boston University application

Choosing the right college is one of the most difficult decision in one's life. I regard I have a strong connection and great bond with Boston University.

Because I intend to pursue a career in engineering, I see myself as a member of the Society of Women Engineers. Being a part of that society can help me expand my horizons and realize all my goals at finding the right path to my future career.

Boston University is characterized by its diversity. I strongly believe that different nationalities and variety of cultures can bring people together creating infectious school spirit. As a Polish immigrant I am excited to share my cultural experience while at the same time learning about others.

Boston University has a unique and long history that makes it special. Studying at one of the most prestigious universities in the United States would best prepare me for the future. As a future college student I find Boston University as a perfect place for developing my curiosity of knowledge. I believe Boston University would give me the best opportunities to realize my interest in engineering. Being taught by highly qualified and experienced faculty in the United States would best allow me to acquire knowledge. I believe Boston University will have a great impact on my life transforming me into a better person.