QiuChen
Feb 14, 2018
Writing Feedback / How to Deal with Depression; Three bad influences [4]
Thank you, Holt. Your suggestion will be a great help in my future learning
Thank you, Holt. Your suggestion will be a great help in my future learning
QiuChen
Feb 13, 2018
Writing Feedback / New, modern buildings - is it a good investment? [5]
For'and the old ones be paid enough attention as well', I think you should write'and the old ones needs to be paid attention to'.
For'and the old ones be paid enough attention as well', I think you should write'and the old ones needs to be paid attention to'.
QiuChen
Feb 13, 2018
Writing Feedback / How to Deal with Depression; Three bad influences [4]
In recent years, depression is becoming increasingly common. Three bad influences that it can bring about are listed as follows:
First, people suffered from depression are often in bad moods, which may lead to conflictions among people. Second, they are less likely to be engaged in out-door activities than normal people, which are conducive to them both physically and mentally. Third, depression is a leading cause for people's committing suicide. Millions of people lost their lives because of it.
For self-help, there are many methods that they can take to get rid of it. Keeping smiling is the first step, for 'Smile is the cure to all diseases.' Moreover, chatting with others is another good method, because great power can be conveyed through it.
to get rid of depression
In recent years, depression is becoming increasingly common. Three bad influences that it can bring about are listed as follows:
First, people suffered from depression are often in bad moods, which may lead to conflictions among people. Second, they are less likely to be engaged in out-door activities than normal people, which are conducive to them both physically and mentally. Third, depression is a leading cause for people's committing suicide. Millions of people lost their lives because of it.
For self-help, there are many methods that they can take to get rid of it. Keeping smiling is the first step, for 'Smile is the cure to all diseases.' Moreover, chatting with others is another good method, because great power can be conveyed through it.
