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Feb 19, 2018
Writing Feedback / New Zealand and spending money - Ielts taks1 the pie chart [3]
The two graphs indicate the data concerning the online earnings in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Overall, we found that the most apparent figure was shown in travel since its number was the largest proportion, while it saw a decreasing trend over a ten-year period.
In 2003, the largest proportion can be found in Travel, which occupied 36%, followed by clothes, taking up 24%. with regards to the remaining items, online shop made a similar amount of money on film and music and clothes, both of which accounted for roughly two fifths in total, the former accounted for 21% and the latter, 19%.
However, 10 years later, money travel and clothes made mildly dropped by 7% and 8% respectively, both accounted for 29% and 16%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at the earning for film and music and books. This account for a massive 33% of the online earning, but only 22% money made in books, which underwent a minimal change by 3%.
In conclusion, New Zealanders appeared to spend more money on visual engagements via internet such as film, music and books over the given years.
Online Business profit
The two graphs indicate the data concerning the online earnings in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Overall, we found that the most apparent figure was shown in travel since its number was the largest proportion, while it saw a decreasing trend over a ten-year period.
In 2003, the largest proportion can be found in Travel, which occupied 36%, followed by clothes, taking up 24%. with regards to the remaining items, online shop made a similar amount of money on film and music and clothes, both of which accounted for roughly two fifths in total, the former accounted for 21% and the latter, 19%.
However, 10 years later, money travel and clothes made mildly dropped by 7% and 8% respectively, both accounted for 29% and 16%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at the earning for film and music and books. This account for a massive 33% of the online earning, but only 22% money made in books, which underwent a minimal change by 3%.
In conclusion, New Zealanders appeared to spend more money on visual engagements via internet such as film, music and books over the given years.
