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enorman

Feb 20, 2018

Writing Feedback / New Zealand and spending money - Ielts taks1 the pie chart [3]

Hello big0321lala! It's very difficult to judge your essay without the pie chart.
In my opinion, writing task 1 should follow a below structure:
- First paragraph: Introduction
- Second paragraph: Overview (you should describe the overall figure like orders or trends and should not give any detail figures)
- Third and Fourth paragraphs: Body 1 and 2

enorman

Feb 19, 2018

Writing Feedback / Consumer Spending Trends and Statistics [2]

essay about consumer expenditure

The chart illustrates the percentage of consumer expenditure by category in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in the year 2002.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the amount of money paid out on food, drinks and tobacco in five nations registered the highest among three sections . By contrast, the figure for leisure and education expenditure was the lowest out of three categories.

In 2002, the highest percentage of national customer expenditure was in Turkey, at 32.14 %. It was a bit higher than that figure in Ireland, at 28.91%. The proportion of people in Ireland and Turkey spending money on clothes and shoes showed a similar distribution, which was 6.43% and 6.63 % respectively.

In term of leisure and education, Spanish spent the lowest amount of their income on this section. That figure in Italy and Sweden was slightly larger, at 3.20% and 3,22% respectively. Among these three countries, the expenditure of Italian consumers on clothing and footwear was the highest, which accounted for 9.00%.