Writing Feedback / Questbridge - "What are your career goals" question, and two 35-word essays. Help Requested [3]

proper answers for Questbridge questions

I'm looking to receive some assistance in writing my responses for these Questbridge questions. My test scores were not as great as I would have liked them to be, so I want my essays to be near flawless. So I figured you could help me with that? Please feel free to be as honest as possible.

What are your career goals and how did you develop them? (400 characters)
My goal is to become a diplomat between the United States and South Korea. I have a lot of respect for Korea because of its resilience, including both its weakened relations with other Eastern nations, and its status as a poverty stricken nation becoming a global superpower. I would like to work and ensure that South Korea and the United States continue to have a long-lasting relationship.

What is your favorite source of inspiration? (35 words)
From my grandfather, I long to inherit the eternal legacy of patience, selflessness and compassion. He strongly believed in these senses, and I will use them in my interactions with others.

What is the compliment that you have been paid that you are most proud of? Who gave you the compliment? (35 words)
I was told that I am very inspiring by my counselor. This is important to me because I work actively to motivate my peers to remain honest, unwavering and academically focused.

These are only a few I have written. Please look at them for me!