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Sophocles' play and today's world. Essay on Hubris in Oedipus Rex and Antigone, thesis help??

Hello! I am editing my argumentative essay for my 10th grade honors English paper, and I need help with my thesis. In class, we have been talking about going away from the formulaic "3-prong" thesis statement, which is what I've done. I'm having trouble converting it into a creative, non-formulaic sentence. Her's what I have so far:

the human condition of Hubris

"In Sophocles' plays Oedipus Rex and Antigone, the perpetual human condition of Hubris is illustrated; and a look into modern America brings the demise of highly influential celebrities like Kanye West, widely adored actors like Robin Williams, and even powerful world leaders like Kim Jong Un into light."

My paper is due tomorrow, sorry for the short notice:/

Thanks so much to anyone who helps me!:)