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mt000000   
Apr 1, 2018
Writing Feedback / To share information to the public or not [4]

@abang yoga
Thank for your helping on reviewing my essay. I will improve on those grammar errors on my writing.

@Holt
Hi, I am not sure what is GRA development exercises that you mentioned, but I will keep improving my vocabulary and how to develop my sentences.
mt000000   
Mar 27, 2018
Writing Feedback / To share information to the public or not [4]

The whole question of the task as below:
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

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crucial information is an asset



Nowadays, individuals are able to receive various information from external world in their surroundings. The information usually created by experts on different area of science, commerce or the academy. Many are loving to devote but some are relative selfishness. Hence, I am going to present my standpoints and some specific examples as below.

First of all, many human beings are willing to share the resource, in order to help others to achieve their target. For example, when a student requires to finish a task which given by a professor. Therefore, the teacher will provide the academic papers which he or she accomplished to his or her student. By this way, the student could easily to learn the knowledge, to complete the assignment, and also to in-depth study the subject. One day, the student would publish an advanced theory is helping the whole society, and he or her will be able to devote their knowledge to the world.

On the other hand, some are relatively realistic and not want to the valuable information shared to others. For instance, a company developed a new medicine which will cure a particular cancer. However, the medicine will not be released to the public, because they invested a plenty of money to research. Besides, to sell the medicine will benefit the business growth, and also to became the pioneer of a market.

In conclusion, as we all known, there are different type of human personalities in the society. When the issue is relating to the benefit and money, the people who are focusing on their own prosperity, and would not cease to earn more. In fact, on the ethical side, many still enjoy sharing their precious value to keep the growth of a society.
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