Undergraduate / 'Some may call it a passion' - FSU essay vires [7]

For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

Until last year, I never truly understood the concept of "vires" or strength until the experience occurred right on the tip of my finger. During a drill in practice of my junior lacrosse season I badly bruised my finger to the point when I could not bend it for a month. My fingernail throbbed and turned blue. When the incident first occurred I thought that my bruised fingernail would prevent me from playing the game I love. However, not playing during practices and games was not an option. Through the pain I continued to play. It is this strength which I found within myself that was derived from my inner ambition to keep playing. It is what drove me and inspired me every day to continue to persevere. Some may call it passion; others may call it a desire. But in reality it is an intrinsic strength found within those who wish to achieve greatness. I believe this "vires" or strength is what will benefit me most in my coming years. This is the strength that will guide me on my path to excellence.

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