Mushu22
Apr 18, 2018
Book Reports / Curious Incident of the dog... What are the major ways Christopher has changed in the end of novel [3]
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll try what you said :)
I changed my introduction a bit and so is the first introduction better or the second one?
INTRODUCTION 2: Imagine living in a world [...] every day in his life. Christopher Boone is a 15-year-old autistic boy who is a mathematical genius, however, cannot interpret people's emotions properly. Through Christopher's perspective, the world is a terrifying place, since Christopher has little understanding of how the world works. Where jokes can cause confusion and new environments can lead to extreme fear. He occasionally overcomes these fears by working on math or isolating himself from the world.
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll try what you said :)
I changed my introduction a bit and so is the first introduction better or the second one?
INTRODUCTION 2: Imagine living in a world [...] every day in his life. Christopher Boone is a 15-year-old autistic boy who is a mathematical genius, however, cannot interpret people's emotions properly. Through Christopher's perspective, the world is a terrifying place, since Christopher has little understanding of how the world works. Where jokes can cause confusion and new environments can lead to extreme fear. He occasionally overcomes these fears by working on math or isolating himself from the world.
