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Name: Mai Lộc
Joined: May 20, 2018
Last Post: May 26, 2018
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School: Nguyễn Hữu Cầu

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May 26, 2018
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2 (People argue about children's decision) [6]

i think :
the fifth line : the structure of the sentence is wrong because instead of : children when they are ... --> children when buying food.....

morever, you can write : be lacking in/ lack sth. it's quite wrong to say : be lack of
hope it will help u
mailoc   
May 20, 2018
Writing Feedback / Effect of technology. Do the advantages of the online business meetings outweigh the disadvantages ? [2]

online tools the best if used it wisely



Business meetings, discussions, traning are shown to be happening online nowadays. With the modern technology, it makes lots of advantages. Then the disadvantages are in parralel with them.

First and foremost, online meetings save our time and commuting costs. Morever, those can take place everywhere at any time so long as you have a computer. In addition , with the help of the onlline tools, users just sit at home and no worry about workplace is established.

As far as you know, we are living in time of integration, cooperating between the business with foreign counterparts is usual, which requires a convenient way to bind them together and logging in online solves that issue, ultimately expanding the business network, increasing work productivity.

However, there are certain disadvantages. It will take an amount of time for users to get familiar with the web tools used for organizing thier meetings. But that is just the tip of the iceberg. In process of using, mistakes or lag even prevents us from working efficiently. Beside those, attendants are easily distracted by stuff outside like fb or listening to music simultaneously. Noone can stop it and the meeting comes to be useless.

In general, everything in life has two sides, not except for online work, the important is how we prepare and be ready for any situation happening. So i think we will get the best value for the online tools if using it wisely.
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