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Name: Linh
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Jun 22, 2018
Writing Feedback / Essay about the charts' summarization - money for children's sports in Britain [2]

Topic: The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

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The charts demonstrate the British parents spent how money on their children's sport a month and how many children who took part in football, athletics and swimming over a course of 5 years starting from 2008.

As can be seen from the charts, it is clearly evident that the amount of money spent witnessed an upward trend, the number of children joined swimming that went up sharply, that of football increased slightly and that of athletics remained relatively stable.

Each British parent used money for their children's sports enrollment that stood at 20 euros a month in 2008. Then it rose steady and peaked at roughly 35 euros per month in 2014.

The first sport is athletics enrolled by children was approximately 0.1 million in 2008 that leveled off in the next 2 years. The year 2012 was witnessed a dramatic climb in the number of children at 5 million that stayed unchanged in 2014. The number of children chose swimming that started at roughly 2.5 million in 2008 that grew modestly around 5 million in 2014. The number of children played football evened out from 2008 to 2014 at about 8 million.




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