Undergraduate / "I can be the person I dream of" - Common App. Macalester Supplement. [5]

this is such a good essay about ur life. but, was it really ur way of life??
never mind..for my self I can't write a good essay like this, really organized (i think).
ya, even though I still found some missed words or sentences, but still good.

just like what the moderator said "the person I dreamt of" is usually directed to someone u r dreaming of. so that's not about u who wanna be.

maybe sometimes we write something doesn't see any grammar or structural, we just see if it is suitable or not to be heard.

Essays / Literary Topic or theme for my thesis: "slavery" or "prodigal man" [8]

Prodigal Summer, what theme??

finally i choose a novel for my thesis, Prodigal Summer. but i still confuse what theme that i should take for this novel..??and also other references for my thesis based on this novel..??

thx

Undergraduate / "It's all about faith." - Personal Essay for Help [7]

very interesting essay...good work...;)

Essays / Literary Topic or theme for my thesis: "slavery" or "prodigal man" [8]

my instructor didn't give us any sample, it's all up to us...
actually, i didn't like too much of literary, so that i didn't know about literary novel...
hmm..how about Disparagingly and Affection on Barbara Kingsolver's Prodigal Summer??can u give me some suggestion of references to write my thesis according to that novel??