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Sep 19, 2009
Undergraduate / "well-rounded person" - FSU entrance essay [8]

It's easy to forget the big picture when your daily life is packed with academics and athletics. Every college student has dreams. For student-athletes, those dreams usually include competing at the next level, whatever that may be. There's nothing wrong with it, but I know to well that the reality is that fewer than 5 percent of all college athletes move on to the next level. This does not mean I must drop athletic pursuits altogether.

My Plan A is to pursue my dream of studying Sports Physiology/Sports Medicine. Without much effort I understand that I should pay more attention to the student part of my student-athlete title. A sign hanging in my guidance counselers office reinforces this to me, "Be ready for whatever opportunities life presents after college". I've put myself in positions of leadership in many forms, most notably my schools student council and selection as a team captain for the past three years. I understand that each student brings value to the institution in different ways, whether it be musical talent, academic excellence, or athletic ability. My love of sports has taught me many skills that will serve me well in college and beyond. I have demonstrated that I am goal oriented, work well in a group, communicate, well organized and disciplined.

Vince Lombardi said, "Individual commitment to a group effort-that is what makes a team work, a company work, a society work, a civilization work." I have learned how to test and expand personal limits, to get the most out of every training session. I take great pride in representing my family, my school and community in all that I do. I'm an extremely hard worker, that will serve me well at the next level in my life. I embody the aspect of Mores with all I have.
jodim10   
Sep 18, 2009
Undergraduate / "well-rounded person" - FSU entrance essay [8]

I like to believe that I'm a well-rounded person. Up to this point in my life I've achieved both academic and athletic success. I realish my position as a student athlete. I've worked hard and have put myself in a postion of leadership, an opportunity to lead and mentor from the front. With the help of my family, friends and teachers we've created an environment that has embodied my personal high standards that will carry me throughout my life, beginning at Florida State University.

Vince Lombardi wrote, "Individual commitment to a group effort-that is what makes a team work, a company work, a society work, a civilization work." I've played organized sports nearly my entire life, most recently basketball and track at the varsity level. Physical strength is not all I strive for. For me, being a success on the court, track, or in the classroom takes comittment, and organization by all involved. I have learned how to test and expand personal limits, to get the most out of every training session. My single efforts affect the whole group, if I want to to be a success it will take a group effort. I take great pride in representing my family, my school and community in all that I do. Having strong morals and a good head on my shoulders is just as important to me as my intellectual strengths. I take very seriously that I am a constant example for younger students and adults. My parents have created a close Christian home, I live my life accordingly and try to simply be the best I can in everything I put my hand to.

My strong faith is the most important element of my life. I was one of the lucky ones; I have strong, loving parents and a older sister who all of which have steered me in the right direction. Part of being a positive influence is reaching out to other people in a friendly but confident young adult. I'm an extremely hard worker, a strong character trait that will serve me well at the next level in my life. I have gained the respect of my teammates, my coaches, teachers and my peers. I embody the aspect of Mores with all I have.
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