Writing Feedback / Agriculture development didn't solved the hunger problem over the world [5]

When I was reading this essay I felt that the essay is divided into different parts. Reading an essay should feel like one whole thing. Please try to connect the paragraphs of the essay together. Start each essay with some connecting phrases or words such as (moreover, inspite of, Hence, in conclusion).

Writing Feedback / Writing task 2 IELTS. These days people in some countries are living in a "throw-away" society [3]

Hi Hoang,

I don't know much about what is expected in IELTS essays. But if you want your writings to communicate effectively, then try to link your paragraphs with LINKING WORDS (words like although, moreover, therefore, in spite of ,etc).

The flow of ideas in the essay above is spot on according to me.

Thanks.