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Aug 10, 2018
Writing Feedback / The average amount of Vietnamese people who studied in France, Russia and in the USA (2000 - 2015) [2]
The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and
America between 2000 and 2015.
The line graph illustrates the average amount of Vietnamese people studied in France, Russia and the US over a period of 15 years starting from 2000.
Overall, it is clear that while the Vietnamese students in both France and America increased significantly, the opposite was true for Russia. Besides, the figure for the US was highest during the period.
In 2000, there was an average of nearly 3.5 million Vietnamese students in France, in comparison with around 3.5 million and 1.5 million students in Russia and America respectively. Over the next five years, the number of people studied in France and Russia fall by approximately 1 million. By contrast, the figure for Vietnamese students in the US witnessed a considerable increase of roughly 2 million.
From the year 2005 onwards, it can be seen that the average number of Vietnamese students in the US increase sharply and reach a peak of 5 million in 2015. Oppositely, the figure for Russia decreased to its lowest point in 2010, nearly 1.5 million, which was followed by a gradual increase to about 2.5 million in 2015. During the same period, there was a rapid increase in the figure for Vietnamese students in France after experiencing a stability from 2005 to 2010.
P/s: I'm a beginner in Ielts and it's my first time I write a task 1 essay. Thanks in advanced.
Vietnamese students studying in different parts of the world
The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and
America between 2000 and 2015.
The line graph illustrates the average amount of Vietnamese people studied in France, Russia and the US over a period of 15 years starting from 2000.
Overall, it is clear that while the Vietnamese students in both France and America increased significantly, the opposite was true for Russia. Besides, the figure for the US was highest during the period.
In 2000, there was an average of nearly 3.5 million Vietnamese students in France, in comparison with around 3.5 million and 1.5 million students in Russia and America respectively. Over the next five years, the number of people studied in France and Russia fall by approximately 1 million. By contrast, the figure for Vietnamese students in the US witnessed a considerable increase of roughly 2 million.
From the year 2005 onwards, it can be seen that the average number of Vietnamese students in the US increase sharply and reach a peak of 5 million in 2015. Oppositely, the figure for Russia decreased to its lowest point in 2010, nearly 1.5 million, which was followed by a gradual increase to about 2.5 million in 2015. During the same period, there was a rapid increase in the figure for Vietnamese students in France after experiencing a stability from 2005 to 2010.
P/s: I'm a beginner in Ielts and it's my first time I write a task 1 essay. Thanks in advanced.
