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Esseenn

Oct 4, 2018

Undergraduate / Help me to correcting my introduction essay :) [6]

@btoguntade
Thank you very much for your kindness to help me :)
your suggestions are very helpful.
I'll try to revise my introduction according to your suggesting as you mentioned :
1. Full name
2. My age and where i was born
3. Thw fact i moved, when and why
4. Talk about everyone in my family
5. My brothers actual ages
6. My current school
7. Reason why i wrote the introduction.

Esseenn

Oct 4, 2018

Undergraduate / Help me to correcting my introduction essay :) [6]

Hi @btoguntade

In this introduction assignment, i must share my high school, where i live, my family and how i go to school everyday.

I put my brothers detail to share about my family.

tbh this is my first online writing assignment from my teacher so there will no letter to return for me.

Thank you for your promptly reply
Esseenn

Esseenn

Oct 4, 2018

Undergraduate / Help me to correcting my introduction essay :) [6]

self-introduction essay

Hello Mister! I want to tell you about my self to you.
My name is Sarah Nuril Iffa and
You can call me by my first name.
I was born in Bekasi, July 15 2000.
I moved to Kediri when i was 14 until graduated from Muhammadiyah High School Kediri.
About my family, I have 2 younger brothers. Their names are Farhan and Fauzan.
The age difference between them is 3 years but seems like twins specially when playing or fighting. I miss them so much because I live independently in a boarding house at Jalan Semanggi Barat near State Polytechnic of Malang place where i study now. By Living close, I can just walk to my college.

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my Introduction Sir.